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April 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I hope you're enjoying (or enjoyed) your time with your parents! Looking forward to an update once you get back and settled :). Very interested in seeing how this relationship goes. A lot of the time when reading Tomione/Volmione I have to stop reading partway through because Tom/Voldemort has gotten too nice or too out of character. You and Nerys seem to be the most consistent at keeping him evil and thus keeping me reading :).
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April 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This story has become a classic for me. I keep re-reading your work. Its amazing! Can't wait to read the next chapter!
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April 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
"No proceeding is better than that which you have concealed from the enemy until the time you have executed it."
...all men are bad and ever ready to display their vicious nature and all women are sneaky whenever they may find occasion for it, for everyone sees what you appear to be, very few really know what you are. Because The lion cannot protect itself from snares without its claws damaging the snare, and the snare cannot defend himself from the lion unless it wraps itself away from the claws. So one must therefore be a careful hunter to recognise snares, and a lion to sharpen its claws to carefully point the snare to frighten wolves instead.
"Nothing is of greater importance in time of war than in knowing how to make the best use of a fair opportunity when it is offered."
First I must say bravo for through out this entire ride this fiction has turned me into a fan but then again you know this. What you don't know is throughout this entire works it has evolved, and is no longer a fanfiction but a work of original art. And to that I say bravo You have evolved the characters past there status Quo, and have given them shape all on there own. First I must state that before I begin my humble review and rambling, I must first explain what this chapter inspired first. Genetics. Yes this had me thinking and often breaking down the magical world genetics, and it had me going back to the beginning. Purebloods, Halfbloods, Muggleborns, and Squibs. I found myself thinking and even reading your fanfiction and going back to reading Harry Potter. and I found the Magical community of the Brits backward, I don't know about other magical communities, but from what I see there still in the dark ages, slowly touching there feet into the muggle way, like the radio, and other items.
Ok back to genetics, let's start at the top Adam(Pureblood), Eve(Pureblood), and Lillith(muggle) for example. Adam and Eve are purebloods, and have a pure blood Lyra, then Adam and Lillith have a child, That child Ezei is a half blood. Now the Pureblood Lyra because her parents were the first is superior because they were first and have discovered magic first however her magic is averge, because her parents are both magic welders. Ezei has magic stronger than Lyra, due to the fact his magic able to have a conduit to gather within the host parent Lilith and store. My point being is that over time with adam and eve creating children and those children continue to reproduce down the line, there gonna eventually have higher squib births because the magic isn't going anywhere and becomes dormant because it has no place to grow and seed. Now let's say a Squib Hamya marries someone from Lyras Line and there a male name Jezi, And they have a child name Merlin, the Squib gave birth to a magical being and in return the gene that was dormant is now active, like a first year. And so the process is repeated till we have muggles, muggleborns, Squibs, Halfbloods, and purebloods, history lesson aside, having a dormant gene that could be activated to give birth to stronger childrens, and Squibs, Halfbloods and muggleborns are at the center of it, because without them purebloods would die out. They may have started it but they need the rest to continue it. Which is brings me to a point, hermione ( Btw thanks for the spelling in your fiction) is the result of two muggles some where in her family history must have been a squib from the the Pureblood 28 that married another squib, then that created a muggle squib, or that squib married a muggle and either form her father side she was the result.
If so Muggleborns are now a worthy conduit, because a muggleborn can circle magic and conduit it, just like a halfblood. And now we get to the reason Dumbbles was scared of Voldiemort, and maybe even hermione, but she was a chess peice he could use, and even if you look at Tonks again magically good. There might be something worthy there in looking at Hermione father and ancestor, and that is all I have to say about the comment form Voldie about her last name being Granger. (Heck she might be from a purblood family.) now I must as always say thank you, for the wonderful chapter, I love the new characters and I love the almost cat fight I love Cissy but I love your new character more. I love new harry, and I love his evolution an I can't wait to see what happens to draco. and I can't wait to see what happens when you remove a hocrux and put it in Luicus. And Finally does Voldie have a plan for Hermione after he removes hers, I mean come on, he can't resist her, he's fallen hard he's like adam and she's his eve. he can fight it all he want. Does he plan to make her immortal too, does he plan to make her create a Hocrux? And 20 chapters seriously! you told us that how could you tell us I like Surprises!, and Lol. With much Love I want to say thank you so much, for everything. Your story is amazing. I must confess I forgot to give you a poem, and I will redouble my efforts next review. *Bows Low* Thank you as always
Your humble Tori
...all men are bad and ever ready to display their vicious nature and all women are sneaky whenever they may find occasion for it, for everyone sees what you appear to be, very few really know what you are. Because The lion cannot protect itself from snares without its claws damaging the snare, and the snare cannot defend himself from the lion unless it wraps itself away from the claws. So one must therefore be a careful hunter to recognise snares, and a lion to sharpen its claws to carefully point the snare to frighten wolves instead.
"Nothing is of greater importance in time of war than in knowing how to make the best use of a fair opportunity when it is offered."
First I must say bravo for through out this entire ride this fiction has turned me into a fan but then again you know this. What you don't know is throughout this entire works it has evolved, and is no longer a fanfiction but a work of original art. And to that I say bravo You have evolved the characters past there status Quo, and have given them shape all on there own. First I must state that before I begin my humble review and rambling, I must first explain what this chapter inspired first. Genetics. Yes this had me thinking and often breaking down the magical world genetics, and it had me going back to the beginning. Purebloods, Halfbloods, Muggleborns, and Squibs. I found myself thinking and even reading your fanfiction and going back to reading Harry Potter. and I found the Magical community of the Brits backward, I don't know about other magical communities, but from what I see there still in the dark ages, slowly touching there feet into the muggle way, like the radio, and other items.
Ok back to genetics, let's start at the top Adam(Pureblood), Eve(Pureblood), and Lillith(muggle) for example. Adam and Eve are purebloods, and have a pure blood Lyra, then Adam and Lillith have a child, That child Ezei is a half blood. Now the Pureblood Lyra because her parents were the first is superior because they were first and have discovered magic first however her magic is averge, because her parents are both magic welders. Ezei has magic stronger than Lyra, due to the fact his magic able to have a conduit to gather within the host parent Lilith and store. My point being is that over time with adam and eve creating children and those children continue to reproduce down the line, there gonna eventually have higher squib births because the magic isn't going anywhere and becomes dormant because it has no place to grow and seed. Now let's say a Squib Hamya marries someone from Lyras Line and there a male name Jezi, And they have a child name Merlin, the Squib gave birth to a magical being and in return the gene that was dormant is now active, like a first year. And so the process is repeated till we have muggles, muggleborns, Squibs, Halfbloods, and purebloods, history lesson aside, having a dormant gene that could be activated to give birth to stronger childrens, and Squibs, Halfbloods and muggleborns are at the center of it, because without them purebloods would die out. They may have started it but they need the rest to continue it. Which is brings me to a point, hermione ( Btw thanks for the spelling in your fiction) is the result of two muggles some where in her family history must have been a squib from the the Pureblood 28 that married another squib, then that created a muggle squib, or that squib married a muggle and either form her father side she was the result.
If so Muggleborns are now a worthy conduit, because a muggleborn can circle magic and conduit it, just like a halfblood. And now we get to the reason Dumbbles was scared of Voldiemort, and maybe even hermione, but she was a chess peice he could use, and even if you look at Tonks again magically good. There might be something worthy there in looking at Hermione father and ancestor, and that is all I have to say about the comment form Voldie about her last name being Granger. (Heck she might be from a purblood family.) now I must as always say thank you, for the wonderful chapter, I love the new characters and I love the almost cat fight I love Cissy but I love your new character more. I love new harry, and I love his evolution an I can't wait to see what happens to draco. and I can't wait to see what happens when you remove a hocrux and put it in Luicus. And Finally does Voldie have a plan for Hermione after he removes hers, I mean come on, he can't resist her, he's fallen hard he's like adam and she's his eve. he can fight it all he want. Does he plan to make her immortal too, does he plan to make her create a Hocrux? And 20 chapters seriously! you told us that how could you tell us I like Surprises!, and Lol. With much Love I want to say thank you so much, for everything. Your story is amazing. I must confess I forgot to give you a poem, and I will redouble my efforts next review. *Bows Low* Thank you as always
Your humble Tori
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April 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ach du meine Liebe, das war wieder unglaublich geil. (I live near the German border)
(geil in Dutch means something else but fits it rather nicely)
Ginny, oh my god in public, poor, poor girl. (not really though...) Rabastan is so bad to the core.
Voldemort will have our favorite heroine for diner. But secretly I hope he falls for her. One can wish, huh?
A bit more descriptive (lemons) could have been nice. Can we still have the chemistry and anticipation. Maybe when they are in public. Some lust fill glares and heat. Make Hermione do naughty things.
Where is this headed, was this a prelude into more evilness?
(geil in Dutch means something else but fits it rather nicely)
Ginny, oh my god in public, poor, poor girl. (not really though...) Rabastan is so bad to the core.
Voldemort will have our favorite heroine for diner. But secretly I hope he falls for her. One can wish, huh?
A bit more descriptive (lemons) could have been nice. Can we still have the chemistry and anticipation. Maybe when they are in public. Some lust fill glares and heat. Make Hermione do naughty things.
Where is this headed, was this a prelude into more evilness?
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March 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I lit a professor
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March 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
So, yeah.
Finally I managed to gather up my lazy-ass self and said to myself "If I'm reading it for the past few months, I can also sign up and leave a review, it's only fair."
I mean, you know, and everyone knows your story is just-fucking-awesome. I mean there is nothing to add here. The tension, the storytelling, just... well, I'm speechless. I really don't know what to say other than SHITLOAD OF AWESOME.
I LOVE VOLDIE IN HERE. SO IN-CHARACTER. Damn, you wrote him better than JKR. Just the way I imagined him to be. Damn, girl!
If you ever write a book of your own - AND YOU SHOULD - please, link it to me. I would love to read it. Or review it. Or anything. Especially if you will be adding such deliciously wicked characters in it. With that writing style you have. (As an author myself, I appreciate the way you write, your storytelling, all of it. So readable and so intriuging it leaves you hanging. When the chapter ends I'm like: damn, can't wait for the new one! And then I check everyday. *crazy*)
So, anyhow. Good luck on your trip. And don't be afraid of plane crashing. There is more chances (statistically) for the car accident on the way to airport. (Just to make you feel better).
Be well, good luck, keep doing what you do, what you love to do. This fanfic you write is without a doubt making life more entertaining for many people, not just me. :)
Finally I managed to gather up my lazy-ass self and said to myself "If I'm reading it for the past few months, I can also sign up and leave a review, it's only fair."
I mean, you know, and everyone knows your story is just-fucking-awesome. I mean there is nothing to add here. The tension, the storytelling, just... well, I'm speechless. I really don't know what to say other than SHITLOAD OF AWESOME.
I LOVE VOLDIE IN HERE. SO IN-CHARACTER. Damn, you wrote him better than JKR. Just the way I imagined him to be. Damn, girl!
If you ever write a book of your own - AND YOU SHOULD - please, link it to me. I would love to read it. Or review it. Or anything. Especially if you will be adding such deliciously wicked characters in it. With that writing style you have. (As an author myself, I appreciate the way you write, your storytelling, all of it. So readable and so intriuging it leaves you hanging. When the chapter ends I'm like: damn, can't wait for the new one! And then I check everyday. *crazy*)
So, anyhow. Good luck on your trip. And don't be afraid of plane crashing. There is more chances (statistically) for the car accident on the way to airport. (Just to make you feel better).
Be well, good luck, keep doing what you do, what you love to do. This fanfic you write is without a doubt making life more entertaining for many people, not just me. :)
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March 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to say I LOVE this story and your writing!!!!!!!! Can't wait till the next update!!!
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March 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Naughty, naughty. You see you had me slowly and systematically strangling and torturing the lovely Cara and raging at Hermione for her weakness. But now everything is perfect, I love how Cara is able to seamlessly fit into Hermione's life like a perfect big sister suffering from the same addiction to a powerful man she technically can have but is only barely fighting it. I know Cara isn't the type to fall to weakness but Lucius is a unique Achilles Heel. As for Hermione she is blossoming under Harry and Cara's affections, with them being the sycophant type devoted followers who are leading her ever so gently down the road towards acceptance in the world she lives in ruled by the emotionally crippled damn near bipolar man she loves. I'm enjoying the Tiger and Cat game with Hermione and Voldemort. She is finally playing correctly and learning to seductively demand and persuade rather than screaming and breaking down. Please be safe on your trip and have a good visit. I can't wait for the next update in a month.
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March 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Two chapters, you're spoiling us :) Very sad news from France but I really wouldn't worry, as they're saying on the news one of those planes takes off every 2 seconds. Only one has had an issue.
Enjoy your holiday and we look forward to your return and another update.
Enjoy your holiday and we look forward to your return and another update.
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March 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Yes writing van be therapeutic, as much as reading can be. I had a hellish day today, then stumbling on your update of no lees than two chapters. Bliss. Thanks.....
Have a good month... Will miss your update.
Wil. Be writing my own stuff to alleviate... As it is therapeutic....
Have a good month... Will miss your update.
Wil. Be writing my own stuff to alleviate... As it is therapeutic....