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Would love to recomend this story on my profile but I need a writer id and story id? Let me know if your interested, I feel you deserve more readers, your story is one of a kind, a definite must read.

This was entertaining...not quite how I would have ended it myself, but I think that even if I were to try to rewrite the ending, I'd end up this same way....
Good Work
I did not notice that English was not your first language until somewhere in the 30-35th chapters, and usually I pick up on that much earlier. I would say amazing work.

sad that this is going to end soon! great chapter! I will be anxiously waiting for the finale.

Why you rotten no good., sneak.. You know I was lurking, I waited to see how this would go how this would twist would turn out. You don't disappoint but the focus of the story changed when the twist happened he focused changed to Harry and heromine took the back seat. No they shared the spot light even then Harry became important. I felt the twist was so sudden that it took me a while to adjust. Time travel is never easy, how we handle it, what the cause and then the effect is, I felt it wasn't needed and that your original flow before was great. The move was done so sudden and was done with an almost incompleteness to the travel, and well heromine and Harry both seemed rushed and not fleshed out. In fact by heromine regressing and Harry mad, I needed more I think. But with that being said, my heromine shipping with Tom is only hope and a world controlled by Tom and Harry well let's face it he's the son Tom always wanted, and I'm leaving it at that. I think the fault lays partly with me, the things I said and wish to happen, I hope it didn't warp anything. Not saying your writing isn't awesome, because I loved every minute of this. I love your work and wish to see more of it and I would love to see how things go this time around, maybe "hell paved with evil intentions" and if you do time travel have fun with it. LolThe job of the viewer is to offer there authored the most honest and profound options and any advice that could service them in the current and future content. With that being said I love this story from beginning to end, ok I'll shut up now.... Thanks

The tori

I shed a few tears while reading this ): Towards the end, I held back the tears but there was a constant lump in my throat. This was so beautifully written!! I'm so sad and I can't wait for the epilogue so I can get some closure. Again, so we'll-written! Yours is one of the few stories that I always look forward to reading. Please don't ever stop!

Loved it your explanation off Dracula was so much better in This chapter. Maybe You could axjust the chapter where Dracula is introduced so anyone reading This understands. I het You want to keep it mysterious, but maybe You could alter it and still keep it a mystery. Uhm well paradox right there.

I'm glad I went ahead reading tho even when chapter 1 and 2 seemed difficult, but a friend of my stated some writers want their readers earn it to get treats. And it was a big treat. I'm sure I'm rereading.

Can we have some Tom/ Hermione lemons as a side chapter? And some Lucius??? Please, pretty please? *loves to beg*....

Amazing!

WHAT THE FUCK!!!!! Just happened?


Lucius cannot die! Do you hear me!!!

Oh my word...

Luckily we had Mrs. Gaunt telling us Voldemort lives.

Hermione will become minister for Italy.

Other than that, utter and total awesome chapter...

I'm loving your story!! Just a random suggestion,I have a mental image of Hermione lip singing and dancing in her apartment to Mercy by Duffy and Voldermort walks in! Just had to put it out there! Can't wait to read more!

This is probably the best Tomione I've read. Finished reading everything in a day. Absolutely amazing. Great job. :) I shall keep checking for your next update. :)