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March 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Things are never easy for Harry, want's to do his job to the best of his abilities but is hampered by politics and having to worry about public perception.
-Ballsy move to willingly choose veritaserum. Dennis is either very confident or he is trying to get Harry to lower his guard. Yeah, definitely seeing some cracks in what was a cool facade. I like seeing harry call out the hypocrisy of Dennis manipulating the system. A crime is a crime.
-So Dennis knows about Harry's little trick.
-I can't decide if it is heartwarming or scary that people like the Bard and those with a similar mentality still look up to Harry while doing what they/her/she does.
"I wish I knew whether I could trust you," Harry whispered.
That....was kind of sad. These 2 have some history, and the thought that the Bard might be someone harry knows personally or has fought alongside is tragic.
This whole situation leaves Harry with more questions then answers. A 'possible' muggelborn who views Harry as a hero, now thats a needle in a haystack.
Hopefully when Harry returns home, Ron and Malfoy won't be trying to end each other.
-waits patiently for the next chapter-
-Ballsy move to willingly choose veritaserum. Dennis is either very confident or he is trying to get Harry to lower his guard. Yeah, definitely seeing some cracks in what was a cool facade. I like seeing harry call out the hypocrisy of Dennis manipulating the system. A crime is a crime.
-So Dennis knows about Harry's little trick.
-I can't decide if it is heartwarming or scary that people like the Bard and those with a similar mentality still look up to Harry while doing what they/her/she does.
"I wish I knew whether I could trust you," Harry whispered.
That....was kind of sad. These 2 have some history, and the thought that the Bard might be someone harry knows personally or has fought alongside is tragic.
This whole situation leaves Harry with more questions then answers. A 'possible' muggelborn who views Harry as a hero, now thats a needle in a haystack.
Hopefully when Harry returns home, Ron and Malfoy won't be trying to end each other.
-waits patiently for the next chapter-
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March 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter
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February 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
#9...
A little TOO easy, don't you think?
A little TOO easy, don't you think?
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February 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
arrrgh, and this is were you left us????
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February 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Harry needs to realize that in the real world, when powerful people have all the money and 'bloodline seats' on the Wizengamot, which does passing laws AND judging whether someone has violated them? Justice falls by the wayside very fast. That is why the Founders of America and the people in nearly every other democratic republic/constitutional republic have realized that separation of making laws, enforcing laws, and judging people guilty of violating laws is the way to go.
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February 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
-Ah some things will never change I suppose, just as the sun rises and sets Malfoy will feel the need to be a lil shit to a Weasley lol.There is only so much that can be excused by grief. These people he is antagonizing are the only ones who give a shit about protecting him and his mother despite their past with them.
-Cool too see Ron try to take the high road even if it was just to mess with Draco. While I doubt Ron would ever support what the Bard is doing, the old him definitely would not have cared enough to try and stop it.
-I LOVED the interaction between Dennis and Harry. Both of them cool as a cucumber and Dennis freely showing he knows more than he should be able to without showing any real fear. You don't show your hand so quickly unless you are 100% sure you can get out of the situation unscathed.
-I also enjoyed how you had them both making good points. Dennis is right that the system is heavily unbalanced and unfair to the have-nots of society(I.E Muggle Borns). Blood and money still play a large role in the post war society and Harry does do his job and treat every criminal equally, once they are out of his hands, if they have enough clout they can just skate out of any charges against them. For all Harry knows it is the same failed system that created the Bard. But Harry is also right that all lives matter, even ones as repugnant as death eaters and no one has the right to be judge jury and executioner.
-So Dennis knows something but he is not just going to give Harry the answers he seeks. He is afraid to talk or perhaps buying time for the Bard by keeping Harry's attention on him.
-Hopefully when Harry gets back to his home, it will still be in one piece and Draco and Ron haven't wrecked anything.
-Cool too see Ron try to take the high road even if it was just to mess with Draco. While I doubt Ron would ever support what the Bard is doing, the old him definitely would not have cared enough to try and stop it.
-I LOVED the interaction between Dennis and Harry. Both of them cool as a cucumber and Dennis freely showing he knows more than he should be able to without showing any real fear. You don't show your hand so quickly unless you are 100% sure you can get out of the situation unscathed.
-I also enjoyed how you had them both making good points. Dennis is right that the system is heavily unbalanced and unfair to the have-nots of society(I.E Muggle Borns). Blood and money still play a large role in the post war society and Harry does do his job and treat every criminal equally, once they are out of his hands, if they have enough clout they can just skate out of any charges against them. For all Harry knows it is the same failed system that created the Bard. But Harry is also right that all lives matter, even ones as repugnant as death eaters and no one has the right to be judge jury and executioner.
-So Dennis knows something but he is not just going to give Harry the answers he seeks. He is afraid to talk or perhaps buying time for the Bard by keeping Harry's attention on him.
-Hopefully when Harry gets back to his home, it will still be in one piece and Draco and Ron haven't wrecked anything.
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February 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 7:
-Wonder just how closely the Muggle born legion is connected to the bard or if he/she is just using them as a lightning rod to point Harry in the wrong direction. Seeing as how crappy things for Muggleborn before and especially during the war, if one of there members is the bard, even if they suspected something it is doubtful they would turn them in. As far as they could be concerned the Bard is just taking out the very people they view as the enemy to their continued existence.
- Children...the Malfoys are actually children and Harry is the poor babysitter lol. Would be a trip if he had just said "nah" and took them too some muggle convenience store for there stuff.
-Harry is a nice dude, but damn he needs top buckle down when it comes too these two. Even when they are actively being stalked by a killer they still gotta have things there way lol.
-Looks like the Bard isn't the only theatrical one, what must Harry have been doing or thinking to come up with that costume.
chapter 8:
-Yep, sad realization for the victims son that the world keeps on turning like nothing has changed.
-Wow, the Bard is one persistent fucker ain't he/she/it? But in a way it serves the Malfoy's right, I mean if they weren't completely safe in Harry's super warded house, just house safe do they think they would have been in a public establishment. Hopefully this will be the cold bucket of ice water over their heads. Although with the failed attack Harry has gleamed a new piece of info.
-Hmm don't know how to feel about Madam Royal, mere bystander or more involved than Harry knows?
-And it all circles right back to Dennis Creevey, if he is involved then he has got some explaining to do, if not then he just has some terrible luck, wrong place wrong time, wrong everything lol. perhaps the Bard is just using him as a scapegoat or for an alibi if necessary.
-Wonder just how closely the Muggle born legion is connected to the bard or if he/she is just using them as a lightning rod to point Harry in the wrong direction. Seeing as how crappy things for Muggleborn before and especially during the war, if one of there members is the bard, even if they suspected something it is doubtful they would turn them in. As far as they could be concerned the Bard is just taking out the very people they view as the enemy to their continued existence.
- Children...the Malfoys are actually children and Harry is the poor babysitter lol. Would be a trip if he had just said "nah" and took them too some muggle convenience store for there stuff.
-Harry is a nice dude, but damn he needs top buckle down when it comes too these two. Even when they are actively being stalked by a killer they still gotta have things there way lol.
-Looks like the Bard isn't the only theatrical one, what must Harry have been doing or thinking to come up with that costume.
chapter 8:
-Yep, sad realization for the victims son that the world keeps on turning like nothing has changed.
-Wow, the Bard is one persistent fucker ain't he/she/it? But in a way it serves the Malfoy's right, I mean if they weren't completely safe in Harry's super warded house, just house safe do they think they would have been in a public establishment. Hopefully this will be the cold bucket of ice water over their heads. Although with the failed attack Harry has gleamed a new piece of info.
-Hmm don't know how to feel about Madam Royal, mere bystander or more involved than Harry knows?
-And it all circles right back to Dennis Creevey, if he is involved then he has got some explaining to do, if not then he just has some terrible luck, wrong place wrong time, wrong everything lol. perhaps the Bard is just using him as a scapegoat or for an alibi if necessary.
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February 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
about #8..
Could it be..the Bard is tracking them thru the Dark Mark? If not, then
that's a good idea! Dontcha' think?
Could it be..the Bard is tracking them thru the Dark Mark? If not, then
that's a good idea! Dontcha' think?
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February 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
about 7...
Interesting.
Interesting.
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February 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Lol I like the image of tall and strange creaky Harry being followed by his two muggle minions