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July 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
It was a nice story. I liked it.
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June 13, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Perfect from start to finish. Thank you for writing this. Any chance of a sequel? Since a part of the bard is still dormant within the bloody baron and seeing as how it is the worse half, it would have far less hesitation in attacking harry if he got in it's way if it ever escaped the bloody baron.
-There is also the issue with the rest of the Muggleborn Legion and how they will respond to the charges against their leader and whether or not they are planning something against pure bloods or people with death eater connections.
-Happy too see even a part of Colin is able to now rest in peace, wonder how Dennis is going to take that news and whether or not the charges against him will hold.
Either way, whether you continue the story or not I want too once again thank you for taking the time to breath life into the prompt I sent. You did it justice in a way I don't think anyone else could have.
-There is also the issue with the rest of the Muggleborn Legion and how they will respond to the charges against their leader and whether or not they are planning something against pure bloods or people with death eater connections.
-Happy too see even a part of Colin is able to now rest in peace, wonder how Dennis is going to take that news and whether or not the charges against him will hold.
Either way, whether you continue the story or not I want too once again thank you for taking the time to breath life into the prompt I sent. You did it justice in a way I don't think anyone else could have.
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June 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
about #21..
This is an interesting direction to take Harry...and have him explore different powers.
Something that isn't being done much in fanfiction.
This is an interesting direction to take Harry...and have him explore different powers.
Something that isn't being done much in fanfiction.
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June 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
-Pretty scary that Collin's intent could influence someone as powerful as the bloody baron. That is some quality hate there. Curious if the other ghosts that make up the bard are as sentient as Collin is or if they have just been reduced to lingering grudges that fuel Collins hate and power.
-Is Harry able to relinquish the power he has gained or is he stuck with it? Either way, finding a way to master it so as to not extinguish another spirit accidentally. To kind of piggy back on your response to Chistopher, yes the ministry does similar things but in this case the spirit in question was a murdered victim, probably a student who was driven insane by the other collective spirits hate along with Collin. The criminals in Azkaban who get the same soul destroying treatment have more or less earned the punishment due to the deeds that landed them in prison in the first place.
-Den mother Minerva is always good to see.
-Kudos to Hermione for despite her past with the Malfoy family, still has it in her to feel sympathy for their loss. Lucius might have been considered scum to a lot of people, but he was still a father and husband.
-Will Harry be interacting with the imprisoned Collin at some point? Like try to reach the formerly innocent boy buried beneath the rage? He might have to do something, even if Collin can't physically harm a Slytherin student or relative of a death eater, words can be just as powerful and I shudder at what the sturndent in question will have to endure being told by a ghost that would very much like to kill them but will settle with dredging up their families darker aspects for all to hear.
-Cute/hot scenes with Drarry are my weakness, you do them so well.
-waits patiently for the next chapter-
-Is Harry able to relinquish the power he has gained or is he stuck with it? Either way, finding a way to master it so as to not extinguish another spirit accidentally. To kind of piggy back on your response to Chistopher, yes the ministry does similar things but in this case the spirit in question was a murdered victim, probably a student who was driven insane by the other collective spirits hate along with Collin. The criminals in Azkaban who get the same soul destroying treatment have more or less earned the punishment due to the deeds that landed them in prison in the first place.
-Den mother Minerva is always good to see.
-Kudos to Hermione for despite her past with the Malfoy family, still has it in her to feel sympathy for their loss. Lucius might have been considered scum to a lot of people, but he was still a father and husband.
-Will Harry be interacting with the imprisoned Collin at some point? Like try to reach the formerly innocent boy buried beneath the rage? He might have to do something, even if Collin can't physically harm a Slytherin student or relative of a death eater, words can be just as powerful and I shudder at what the sturndent in question will have to endure being told by a ghost that would very much like to kill them but will settle with dredging up their families darker aspects for all to hear.
-Cute/hot scenes with Drarry are my weakness, you do them so well.
-waits patiently for the next chapter-
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May 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Two very interesting and satisfying chapters. I did this really emarrassing fangirl squeal thing when I saw you had updated... LOL Thank you very much for the updates I really enjoy this story. Hopefully Harry can find a way to learn to use his Master of Death powers soon.
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May 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
about #19..
You know at this point I would question Dumbledore's portrait about the Bloody baron, to see
how much of a threat HE would be in the future....or how pissed off he truly is & whether the
Baron can be diplomatic about the situation.
You know at this point I would question Dumbledore's portrait about the Bloody baron, to see
how much of a threat HE would be in the future....or how pissed off he truly is & whether the
Baron can be diplomatic about the situation.
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May 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I don't think that Harry has realized what he just did.... by destroying a ghost, he has destroyed the SOUL/spirit of a person. Basically, it is just nonexistence for that person and I believe when Harry realizes that is what he did, he will be sickened at what he did.
It's worse than what a murderer does.
It's worse than what a murderer does.
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May 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
-Well that plan when sideways fairly quickly. The baron didn't keep his end of the bargain true but i totally didn't expect Harry to destroy one of the ghosts. As the master of Death he possibly could have just as easily healed Draco but that temper of his that rears it's head when you hurt someone who is important to him got the better of him.
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May 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I need more of this... I need more of this soooooo bad! Harry and Draco are just so cute, I want to see them become closer and start a relationship even if its kind of clandestine at first. I hope to see more of this fiction soon.
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May 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
about 18..
How come the Baron acts like he was itching for a fight in the beginning???
How come the Baron acts like he was itching for a fight in the beginning???