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by T-W-O

schedule May 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I'm obsessed withy your story and your writing style. It's so intriguing and wonderful and I can't wait to see where this is going!
person ssdawn
schedule April 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I love all of the little side stories and plotlines going on amidst the
larger story. Christmas at the Weasley's was wonderful! The slow
build of for Draco and Hermione is perfect too. Can't wait for more
and hopefully longer chapters.
person ChaosLady
schedule March 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Reminds me of The Taming of the Shrew. My favorite Shakespearean play. Excellent update!
person Victoria
schedule March 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
The quarrel over Hermione's new gown was a delight to read. Great dialogue with wonderful interior commentaries.
schedule March 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the updates! I seem to have missed the last one, so I got two. :-) I love canon-Ron, but yours brought all of that on himself. lol I also enjoyed Madame Malkin's solutions to their bickering. ha ha ha That was fun! Thank you, HG4eva
person tigerrose110203
schedule March 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I am quite enjoying the story so far. Love the way you are depicting the characters and situations.
person Victoria
schedule March 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. You must be great to have around at Christmas; even your fictional gifts for everyone to give and receive in the story were absolutely perfect and so thoughtfully selected for each recipient. I wish I had your knack for gift-giving. The spectacularly romantic Yule dinner and gifts Draco and Hermione gave to each other were outstanding. Your Draco is positively dreamy as well as hot. The way you revealed Draco and Hermione's inner lustful thoughts about each other as they shared dinner was very effective writing. Meanwhile, the mysterious pureblood deaths have me baffled. For a while I thought the Notts were behind all of them, but with Thaddeus Nott missing I'm not so sure. I am enjoying the combination of romance and mystery.
person ChaosLady
schedule March 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
The Weasley's were as amusing as hell in this chapter!
schedule March 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Gah! My head is spinning from this latest chapter... That was crazed- exactly as I would imagine a Christmas at the Weasley's to be!! Great writing!! Looking forward to the formal dinner at the Manor :)
person Ms. M
schedule March 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
love how the story played.. fun ron's moment!too funny at times! happy that draco hex ron at the end, while he and hermione were about to floo.