rate_review Reviews

Very sweet! My eyes got a little misty!

This was a nice story. It was a good premise. However it was a little repetitive for a one-shot. You explained Draco's injuries, than there was a flashback that explained them, then the doctors explained it, then Draco and Harry explained it together. It gets confusing. And in all that explaining Draco's only physical issue is walking. No mentions of things not being at eye level, physical strain moving about even love making. The idea of not being able to have a child was the major problem in this story the injury to the legs wasn't really pertinent and that would've given you more time to flesh out the emotions of both Harry and Draco as they struggled.

Awesome!!!