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by Fenryn

person rigger42
schedule December 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Lol. I like where you've started. I would love to see Harry reach Draco...and maybe Lucius as well.
person rigger42
schedule January 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I really like the premise, with Harry knowing that the Malfoy's have done heinous things, but having the compassion and understanding that Draco, at least, had little choice. Now, of course, Draco has to choose how to move forward.

Its surprising to see a possibility of Harry and Lucius working together to try and save Draco. I'd love to know if Draco killed those people knowing that they would die anyway and if it was in any way to protect his family, or if it was purely self-interest.

That almost all of Gryffindor is rolling their eyes at Ron is just a bonus. ;) However, what is with that rumor about Harry and Ginny and why do I think it would be news to him?
person moodysavage
schedule December 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Lol I quite liked Harry and Draco laughing over knowing each others favorite foods. And I really like how we know each or their thoughts. It is balanced really well between the dialogue and action. Really well written and I look forward to reading more.
person Kafica
schedule December 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to read more, I love what you have done with the characters. Hope you write more soon.
person staar
schedule December 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
as you wrote it , it looks like Malfoy Sr. has changed his way ????? and Draco hopefully gets to be closer to Harry and maybe get help !!!!!!!! Thanks for the update
person BAFan
schedule December 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 2

Very interesting start. I'm curious to see where you take it.
person delia cerrano
schedule December 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Well that's different...Draco having tht horrendus murdering job and yelling at his father with Harry knowing it all. Then Harry & Draco getting along at least for the moment. Poor Ron wii really wig out.