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December 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
LOL at your reply. Forgive me, I have been wanting to write something similar to this, and that question runs around in my head all the time. SO I was only wondering how someone else would handle it. Hehe :)
Thanks for your response, and I can't wait for another chapter. I like this Severus :)
Thanks for your response, and I can't wait for another chapter. I like this Severus :)
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December 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow poor Hermoine, can't believe they (you) did that !!!!!! now lets see what happens next, hope they get along cause I like them as a pair !!!!!
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December 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Severus is endearing in this chapter. I can't believe that MacGonnegall actually made an awkward situation worse, that's usually Snape's talent. Well written.
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December 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter
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December 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I hope this is the real him, because I like him this way. :-) I feel badly for her, but he is doing his best to make it easier, so I hope she starts to reciprocate and at least try to make this work. Thank you! HG4eva
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December 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is a good start. I'm confused about one part though, did Ron marry Susan Bones or Lavender Brown? That part wasn't clear.
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December 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Good start.
Just wanted to let you know that you called Susan Lavender once.
It was when Hermione thinks about Ron getting Susan pregnant and how he could not leave "Lavender" to raise the kid on her own and how Susan was pregnant for the third time now.
Just wanted to let you know that you called Susan Lavender once.
It was when Hermione thinks about Ron getting Susan pregnant and how he could not leave "Lavender" to raise the kid on her own and how Susan was pregnant for the third time now.
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December 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Good, a little progress between the two.
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December 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
ok moving along now ....let's see what happens next with them !!!! thanks !!!
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December 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Lovely start.. I wonder though.. if neither parent wants the responsibility of child raising, what happens to the child???