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February 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Sexy.
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January 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Hot story! I especially like the shower scene. Very hot!
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January 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
so it all is timed too !!!! well now they have to hurry if not ?????? good and thanks for the update !!!!
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December 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm honestly loving this story! I do feel that Snape is a tad bit out of character, but I'm only going off of examples from the books/movies so for all we know, he is a nice person when trying to shag someone to make babies and not get fined :P But anywho, please do not stop writing! Please keep describing him naked and make someone punch the ministry in the face :D
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December 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
thank you for the new chapter
you story is delightful and I can't wait to read the next chapter.
HAPPY NEW YEAR
you story is delightful and I can't wait to read the next chapter.
HAPPY NEW YEAR
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December 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! The Ministry is being very unfair though. They act like it's so easy to have sex with just anyone, lol. Typical government though, they don't care. Heh. Wonder how many of them are in on this whole law.
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December 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm liking your story and you're doing good at the sexual scenes.
The only criticism I have is that in the letter you have two different years. "August 22nd, 2005. Failure to comply by the stroke of midnight on August 25th, 2008" you have 2005 at first than 2008 after. Besides fixing that main thing I think it's pretty well overall.
The only criticism I have is that in the letter you have two different years. "August 22nd, 2005. Failure to comply by the stroke of midnight on August 25th, 2008" you have 2005 at first than 2008 after. Besides fixing that main thing I think it's pretty well overall.
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December 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
The masturbation scene was good, don't worry. Excellent update!
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December 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Well, I for one, am thrilled by the 2 updates! I am glad she's realized her behavior and will hopefully rectify it. I do get her issues, but since there is no way around things, at least she got a good deal. By her reaction to him that morning, I would say she got a really good deal. lol Thanks again!! HG4eva
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December 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I know I should feel badly for her, and I do, but I feel more awful for him. He took a chance on some happiness and is getting nothing for his trouble. I know she is upset and angry, but she's got to stop reading into everything he says and lashing out at him, as it's not his fault the MoM sucks. Thanks for the update and I look forward to more soon! HG4eva
Happy New Year!!
Happy New Year!!