rate_review Reviews

First I have to say I love this story, your writing style is really nicely done.

Second, even though you said you hated writing threesome/moresomes, the Train ride chapter was bloody brilliant and I'd love to see another like that (maybe with more girls :) )

Kind of sucks we won't see Molly in the main story as it would've been a cool twist but am happy your writing a one shot.

I was wondering if Harry will take entire families over (against their will which would show his power) like the Delacours as that'd be hot.

Love the story and can't wait for future chapters.

now i know this is just PWP but i would think one of the first things harry would do is rob tommy boy blind. voldimort has to have stock piles of stuff like books, potions ingrediants, gold an since harry got his memories from the voldimort of 1981 then he should know where everything is. also harry could wipe out most of tom's horcluxes, the only one he can not get would be the one siriuse brother stole. cannon harry proved you can bribe your way into the bank vault.

personally the ones i would want to see harry with would be the greengrass sisters, susan bones, hanna abbott, luna lovegood, fluir and even gabby would be great. an how you pull off fliur and gabby would be slave traders catch them in france and bring them to london to sell to people like malfoy.


having tommy boy create a way to sell galleons for pounds sterling would be great since the exchange rate should be about 5 pounds to the galleon and the price of gold on the muggle market back then was about 300 pounds sterling to the ounce and a galleon likely weighted at least 5 ounces at the least. so you would be looking at 1,500 pounds sterling for a single galleon. so that would be 150,000 pounds for 100 galleons which would only cost you 500 pounds to buy.

Padma is Ravenclaw Parvati was Gryffindor

Another hot chapter. Petunia has grown to like what Harry does to her. I don't mind seeing another Harry/Ginny scene if your not going to do a Molly one. The woods near the burrow might provide a great place for Harry and Ginny. She did say she used to sneak out and steal brooms to fly now her and Harry can sneak out for some fun. Yule ball looks to be fun for Harry so many girls, though I am looking forward to the Harry/Narcissa and eventually the Harry/Hermione.

Your on a roll. You write a great Dom Harry. Petunia and Molly next, I wonder what Harry will do to them :)

And what a ride it was. Excellent threesome action. Give us more....

Another hot chapter. I loved the domination of Pansy. Your on a roll. I can't wait to see what you have in store.

Glad that there are at least going to be some consensual chapters in this story as well. ^_^
Although Ginny pretty much bound herself to Harry, I'll take what I can get lol.

I really, really hope you will write the Harry/Molly one.

Keep updating please.

Thought: instead of ending the year here, since Ginny is now Harry's slave, why don't you have ginny introduce Luna to Harry? If he started to consider her a friend and then learned about her treatment, that'd be cause for him to get back at, hrmm Cho and Marrietta, maybe?