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December 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ya I love that Charlie is one it would be kind funny and cool it u kept it a secret that Charlie is a draken until the meeting if u go that way just for the shock factor with Harry hope to see only one younger drakin I was found that agrivating about stars so many young drakin's so I focused on school and not the drakin I hope u focus a little more on that like u have so far with the smell and growls and that stuff well anyways glad to see an update been checking a lot lol love the story so far great job
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December 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Well I do hope one of them is Charlie...I love them together....not much out there of this pair...don't know why cause they are so cute together...is that other guy one of them or a bad one !!!!! well thanks for the update and hope to see more soon !!!!!!!!!
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December 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! This character Bator is another dracken isn't he? Will he be trying for Harry? That would ceartainly make things interesting
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December 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I am loving your story so far I really hope Charlie is part of his guys I really hated with the other story's with draken that he wasn't can't wait to see more I look for your story every time I check out this web site great job so far
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December 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I think this chapter turned out really well. Your new character is interesting, and i adore Charlie! The only thing that i would implore you to fix is that your spelling Charlie's name wrong. It's just a little thing, but it drives me crazy, lol. Great job though!
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December 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
It's a fairly good start. I've been following along with Starlight's works for quite a while now, and ROTD is one of my favorites. I'm glad she's given you permission to use the Drackens to make your own work of art. I'm enjoying it so far, and i can't wait to see how this story will differ from Star's. One thing i would say, is that you might want to go back through and check the spacing on some of the words and the spelling. It can be a bit distracting at times to read. Great job so far though! ☺
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December 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
So far this is a really good story. I hope that you will continue and I can't wait to see who Harrys mates will be.
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December 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Fred and George are always up to something !!!!!!! can't wait til Harry hears from the headmaster to see what happens next !!!!! Thanks for the update !!!!!!!!!
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December 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Definitely a huge improvement! Great chapter, i enjoyed reading it!
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December 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I found this story when I returned home from being away.. I fell in love and can not wait for more PLEASE!!!!!