rate_review Reviews

I am really enjoying this story. I like the slow buildup, very sensual and realistic seeming. I can't wait to read more!

Quite an interesting read so far. I wish you had gone into more detail on what actually happened during the shoot instead of skimming over the sessions since there was such a build up to it. Lucius doesn't seem to be respecting the bounds that she or the club has put into place, but then again he's used to getting what he wants and not respecting what others say so I guess that's not too surprising. Kinda hoping he gets put in his place. At any rate, I'm eager to see more interaction between Severus and Hermione.

Great addition to the story keep it up! I can't wait to see where this goes!

This story seems very very promising so I hope it won't be abandoned as other stories.

After reading this first chapter, let me say that I'm, well, 'interested'. As Hermione, I can definately see myself being 'there', turned on, posing, slowly disrobing, so as to 'turn on' the photographers! I can also see myself being held in a romantic pose for them. I'd definately want to turn them on. I can see me asking them for a more 'long term' arrangement with one of them, as their girlfriend, or spouse. I may as well make it worth my while! One of them - a Wizard OR Witch, may 'want' me on a more permanent basis, which I'd be aiming for! This may be what Hermione is looking for? I know I would.