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Good outtakes

I did like it. The different traditions were really nice to read about. Your research must have been quite extensive to be so detailed.
I just noticed a little continuity mistake. In the first chapter Parvati signs the Gringotts contract first because she is apparently the elder sister but in this chapter it says that Padma's ceremony was first because she is older.

I can imagine how you feel after doing that much research - doing it is truly exhausting.
When you mentioned Mark's surname previously, I immediately wondered if he is related to Mal. Is Gideon going to help on his behalf as well? I hope so.
I'm really glad that David didn't abandon or demonize Dean and his daughter(s) just because of their magic.

That was really thoughtful of Dean, plus they are really sweet together.