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for Dahlia's Magic

by lexiatel

person Misha_Black
schedule January 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God! Oh my God!!! That was sooo cute!!! I just loved it!!! I know that I haven't reviewed for quite a while, but be sure that I'm still reading every time you post a new chapter. Too cute!! Know that my day didn't go too well, but this chapter has increased my mood so much that I'm going to bed smiling.

Thank you!!
person Trelweny
schedule January 13, 2015 at 12:00 AM
ah... I do believe Draco's parents might be planning his BETROTHAL next year, not his brothel. O_O Unless they actually Don't care about their family name in which case he might as well crush on Dahlia all he wants...

Thanks for writing.
schedule January 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Why would you not want to die?
1. You know that there is nothing after death other than nonexistence and you would MUCH rather stay on this planet.
2. You are put in dangerous situations on a regular basis and would prefer to stay alive in those situations.

I could keep on going but I think everyone gets the point here. The chapter is fine except for that part, anyone with an IQ over 10 who has not been brainwashed with the whole "Heaven after death if you are 'good'!" nonsense would prefer to stay alive forever.
person staar
schedule January 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
ok was is th emotion that she told Snape to make and that she needs it !!!!!!!!! Shit that going to the future was awesome !!!!! but to tell the truth I'm so confessed now....who was the doc and that Trel...guy !!!!! and the one with the green hair that she is scared of who is he , that's not Blake ( the new dark lord??) that wants her powers ...wow so good can't wait for more !!!!!! to tell you very happy with the story and you cause you write so often that I don't have to go nuts waiting so much like other stories that by the time an update comes out I have to read the whole thing again !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person staar
schedule January 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
moving along, and Dubbles is still an ass in this one too !!!!!!! you see that I son't like him either !!!! hope Dahlia gets all of it soon !!!!!!!Thanks for the update
person staar
schedule January 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
It's so funny to see Snape not be able to act in front of Dahlia ...Thanks for the update...and man when are they going to find the book of Riddle?
person staar
schedule January 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I'm back and thanks so much for the update....why didn't Snape find the book, Dahlia has it !!!!!!!!! and what happened to them that they couldn't get to the train !!!!!
person staar
schedule December 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
so it's going to be her that talks to Riddle not that Ginny girl...man she needs to find out about so she can help harry....and is it true what Dubbles said that she will disappear ???? hope not I really like her.....Thanks again for this !!!!!!!!! Happy New Year to you !!!!! be safe !!
person staar
schedule December 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
so it's Dahlia that got the book now, well shit !!!! hope Dubbles knows that and gets it......yes I do love this and Thanks for doing an update on this since nine is writing much now !!!!!!! happy Holidays to you !!!!! and see you soon !!!!!!
person staar
schedule December 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Can't believe that Snape told the Malroy to do what the book told him to do !!!!! hope Dahlia can help out Harry with this too !!!! Thanks for the update !!!!!!!