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oh dear. Did Dumbledore accidentally kill off the horcrux in Harry?

In a way I'm glad to see Dumbledore muck something up. I'm just sorry Harry has to have been the one to bear the brunt of it.

Thanks so much for writing!

That was intense! After all of these, they needed a long vacation with white sandy beaches and drinks with tiny umbrellas in them.
The music was perfect and as the usual, i played it on the exact spot and it just flowed.
Ron have the early calling of becoming a healer. Do

oh my gosh that's so awful!!! That horcrux was awful but what happened to Harry is horrendous. He will go through so much pain from this. But doesn't taking out the horcrux in Harry and the others (eventually) mean that Harry doesn't have to be the one to kill Voldemort?

wow. Lots of things to be well received. Very nice. I do hope Draco can heal fully after all that.

I'm more than a little concerned about the changes from the "original" timeline. I mean I totally understand butterfly effect and all that, but how is it changing Vincent Crabbe? *ponders*

Thanks so much for writing.

Of all the Hermione/Draco fanfictions I have read on this website... this fanfiction right here... I absolutely LOVED... especially after binge reading it for the pass four days... I simply couldn't put it down.

I strongly agree with you on a number of things:
(1) I too think that Ron and Hermione were not well suited for each other... in the original books, it felt like they were thrust onto each other for the sake of the series... over time: Ron would have gotten bored with Hermione, eventually cheat on her and in the end leave her.

(2) Even though Draco was a bully to Hermione: I think it was out of envy and jealousy but secretly he would have wanted her... and I think Draco would have treated Hermione exactly how you portrayed their relationship in this fanfiction:
- Their relationship would first be hidden (for obvious reasons.)
- He would treat her like a Queen... and he would move heaven and earth for her.
- I think if Draco had the choice, he would choose love over his family (His family are the most loving unit.)

I love their entire relationship... the emotional part, their sexual chemistry... talk about HOT!! (You had me blushing and I am 26 years old) also their non-verbal communication method - so adorable.

I love the whole concept of time travelling... especially to that critical part of series - Draco's mark, Dumbledore's death, Snape's decision - but I think Hermione wouldn't be as emotional as you portrayed her. (But it works)

I love the humour (I laughed my head off when Hermione beat the shit out of Ron because he attacked Draco.)

I love the disregard for authority (My goodness, you gave everyone a dirty mouth and it works... at every turn.)

I love that you portrayed Draco as good and that he knows what light and life is... also how he has distance himself from his shit brain friends i.e Crabbe and Goyle.


I was a bit disgusted by Narcissa's and Snape's relationship - I just can think about Snape in that way - (I always thought that Snape became asexual after Lily.) but thank you for giving him something to live for...

Questions:
(1) This melding concept has me a bit confused... Example: Harry and Ginny in the burrow - is it because their future relationship was true and fruitful and the fact that Hermione and Draco are from the future - cause a speed up in their (H&G) relationship?
(2) I sense there is more to Nott, isn't there? (A yes or no answer would be okay... I know you wouldn't want to spoil anything.)
(3) Would Snape insist on Narcissa naming the baby Lily??
(4) How often do you post chapters? I am going there withdrawal... if not do you have another story completed on this site that I can enjoy?

Thank you once again for this fanfiction.

I truly love it!!

so glad you updated and PM'ed me (i feel so special,lol)
nothing much happened here aside from Crabbe being boldly cruel, like he is asserting himself as the new leader of Slytherin just because Draco got injured.
i can't wait for the ost of the next chapter, too bad you can't drowned a horcrux, it would be cool to see Draco's power again. have they told Albus and Severus about Draco's water power? is it wise to not tell Harry that he is also a horcrux?
thanks for updating!

How wonderful to find you've posted a new chapter of this fabulous story! I'm thrilled they'll be able to move forward on the horcrux hunt. It appears they won't all be found and destroyed soon enough to prevent Draco and "Margaret" from having to attend Deatheater Christmas activities. I'm eager, though with some trepidation, to see what Margaret's meeting with Voldemort will be like. I'm still terribly concerned about Draco's leg, but I am sure you have a way for it to be magically fixed at some point. I hope all is well with you and that we'll see more of this story soon.

I am so very sorry you're having a hard time, but I am thrilled to see both stories updated tonight! I am also glad we're moving on with the plan, finally. I hope they can keep to their timeline and destroy the moldy Voldy by Christmas! Thanks, HG4eva

I love this story why did you stop writing it? Please complete it.

Thank you for making this an interactive story ;) My spotify playlist has grown quite immensely.