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for Songs of Regret

by RavieSnake

person Victoria
schedule November 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
What an exciting beginning! This chapter was an emotional rollercoaster. The Pearl is a fascinating plot device. I am eager to read more.
person Victoria
schedule November 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Audio teleprojection is brilliant! I wish I could do that. Great, steamy chapter.
person Victoria
schedule November 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is a fascinating story with so many intriguing elements. I can't wait to read what will happen next.
schedule November 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is a great idea and a captivating tale. Thank you!! I look forward to more really soon! HG4eva
person sherlocked17
schedule November 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Like It. Songs and all. But Draco could be less of a wush.

And because they are really adults it is within character for them to have sex so soon after "meeting". Well they were desperately gagging for weren't they....
person Trelweny
schedule November 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Booyaka! Severus! :happy dances:
hm... why did Dumbledore have him in the meeting though?

Thanks for writing.
schedule November 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love the story so far, please update soon.
schedule November 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
interesting idea; can i request that you make more paragraphs?
person Anon
schedule November 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This really is getting very good.^_^
person Megsie
schedule November 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This story is very intriguing I can't wait for more! Well written keep it up!