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December 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love it. Your writing is so accessible, thanks.
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December 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I feel so badly for Severus, that he still aches after all these years. I hope he can someday find love again. I also wish I had a sex life like theirs! lol Thank you... onto 13! HG4eva
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December 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Can't remember if I've mentioned it before...I love this story.
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December 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Could Snape be any more of an ass?! Sheesh! Give the guy a minute! I take back my wanting him to find happiness. He needs to learn to be human first. Sigh...
I am glad Hermione was able to bring Draco around, but I hope he tells her what's happening, so they can deal with it together. Hiding truths is the start to a fast roll downhill. Thanks, hon! HG4eva
I am glad Hermione was able to bring Draco around, but I hope he tells her what's happening, so they can deal with it together. Hiding truths is the start to a fast roll downhill. Thanks, hon! HG4eva
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December 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was Intense. I wasn't expecting that line of directing from Severus to get Draco to agree to take the mark again but after reading it... well it just made Sense that he do it that way. :headdesks: I'm still upset over it... but at the same time I'm Not, because this time Draco was allowed to really Choose and do so for much better reasons.
Hopefully with two of them there's higher chance for both of the spies to make it through.
Why's Severus so angry though? I'd think he'd be a little less since Draco was a much easier Occlumency Student then his previous one. Misplaced aggression over Lily perhaps, or that Draco must do this at all and He had to be the one to convince him? So many possibilities, and it's likely not merely one.
A little disappointed Draco did not tell Hermione right away 'cause keeping secrets is bad, but I can understand he probably needs to breathe a little with his decision before sharing. Hopefully he won't wait too long. Always a bad thing.
Thanks so much for writing!
Hopefully with two of them there's higher chance for both of the spies to make it through.
Why's Severus so angry though? I'd think he'd be a little less since Draco was a much easier Occlumency Student then his previous one. Misplaced aggression over Lily perhaps, or that Draco must do this at all and He had to be the one to convince him? So many possibilities, and it's likely not merely one.
A little disappointed Draco did not tell Hermione right away 'cause keeping secrets is bad, but I can understand he probably needs to breathe a little with his decision before sharing. Hopefully he won't wait too long. Always a bad thing.
Thanks so much for writing!
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December 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Funny! Snape an Dumbledore peeking in the bathroom.Glad to see that Dumbledore isn't fazed by it.
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December 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Is it disturbing that I was mentally trying to match-up what was happening between Draco and Hermione with what the professors were doing, just to imagine where they were at any moment? I can't stop giggling about it and yet I feel I should be embarrassed.
hm... I would think Severus as a spy would be more interested in discovering the absolute truth than pulling a Harry and trying to simply disprove what he doesn't want to believe. At least he had a momentary flash of perception, realizing that if our Romeo and Juliet are telling the truth he must have not survived the war in their past reality.
...Dumbledore is actually suggesting Draco get the Dark Mark after that being the Joint regret of our leading couple that placed them in this predicament? I can't see That going over well. And yet... after the likely outburst... I can envision a series of events in which Draco might concede. I can't see Hermione being as accepting though.
Thanks so much for writing!
hm... I would think Severus as a spy would be more interested in discovering the absolute truth than pulling a Harry and trying to simply disprove what he doesn't want to believe. At least he had a momentary flash of perception, realizing that if our Romeo and Juliet are telling the truth he must have not survived the war in their past reality.
...Dumbledore is actually suggesting Draco get the Dark Mark after that being the Joint regret of our leading couple that placed them in this predicament? I can't see That going over well. And yet... after the likely outburst... I can envision a series of events in which Draco might concede. I can't see Hermione being as accepting though.
Thanks so much for writing!
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December 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Um, ok, oh my God, wow. This fic holds so much promise and I really can't wait to read the next chapter. I'm glad you didn't send Dumbledore to his, rather depressing and untimely, death. The idea of time travel without the use of a time turner is brilliant.
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December 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
So much hotness.......
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December 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was... wow! HOT! I loved your song choices and boy did he learn quickly. lol The end was sweet and a perfect. Thank you! HG4eva