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for Songs of Regret

by RavieSnake

person sherlocked17
schedule December 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for allowing Draco to stand up to that bitch Bellatrix. I always cringed when she entered the story.

Oh my god Ronald is really such a git..... Poor Hermione....
person Trelweny
schedule December 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
oh yeah... I thought the happenings in this chapter would be hard for them. Perhaps Hermione should have learned a bit more Occlumency too?
I really like the locket. I like the use of mirrors too, although if they're not already they probably should be charmed so that only Draco and Hermione can see anything in them. I know Dumbledore said they only can see the other in their own, but I'm not sure that covered peepers.

hmm... Narcissa's claim about Draco's happiness inspires hopes that she will be more amenable when she finally discovers Margarete is really Hermione. I can dream.
Loved how Draco came to his mother's defense. Brilliant.

Thanks so much for writing.
schedule December 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for another wonderful update. Thought it was sad, I have hope that they will end this quickly and they can be together and happy again. Have a wonderful holiday and HAPPY NEW YEAR! HG4eva
person Victoria
schedule December 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Holy hotness! That was an amazingly erotic chapter. I loved every detail of it.
person Victoria
schedule December 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Powerful firetamer Hermione is a magnificent creation and so is your hot version of Draco. Now that I am so attached to these two characters, the title of the story is making me worried that it will not end happily. I do hope that the regret in the title refers only to the pearl that flung them into the past and not to the events to come. I am loving this story!
person staar
schedule December 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
PMG I love this/......Didn't think that I would , but man was I wrong.....Please update soon again and Thanks !!!!!!!!
schedule December 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 13 awesome! I swear each chapter has a Lil of everything you've got me hooked lol.
person Trelweny
schedule December 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Lots of things tackled in this chapter. Hermione took the news of Draco retaking the mark about how I thought she might, sad but logical about the plan and more upset about being kept in the dark about it. Honestly I'm impressed she waited so long to comment on something being up.

As usual love the soundtrack. :laughs: Someday I'll read each chapter with songs waiting in another window then start them at each prompt just to see how the feel of the story shifts, IF it does.

Hermione's turning out more powerful than I would have anticipated. Will this effect the Prophesy any? What of her friendship with Harry? Come to think of it, will she be able to salvage her friendship in this timeline with Ron? He's not yet the cheating husband he became in the previous timeline so no one but the four of them would understand if she suddenly was awkward around him. She'll probably have to work on that, just as much as she and Draco will have to work on their false antagonism and codes.

Hot kiss was lovely. I like how they're not adverse to showing their affection in front of Severus and Albus.
Loved the notion of fiendfyre behaving in a like manner for fire-elemetalist Hermione as her Patronus. Was there a reason for the raptor and chimera projections of it? I suppose Dumbledore will make some comment or other about that, which perhaps might lead to an explanation.

Thanks so much for writing!
schedule December 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Minus Draco's justifiable upset and concern over getting the mark again, that chapter was great fun! Thank you. HG4eva
schedule December 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I was really pleased with how this was written and just loved how engaging the plot is. Love this can't wait to read more!