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for Songs of Regret

by RavieSnake

person Hinamori
schedule January 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! I find myself constantly checking for an update! :)
schedule January 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Trying to act like a teenager mingling with teenagers..... Difficult.

You made Hermione play quiddith. Brilliant
schedule January 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
That was beautifully sad. I felt bad for the pair as they insulted one another; I hate that he has to use that word on her again. I also look forward to Narcissa's reaction to the truth even more now. lol Thank you, HG4eva
person staar
schedule January 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
when they saw each other in the store and what Hermione said I was so sad for what both of them are going though .....every chapter has me on the edge of my seat here !!!!! Thanks !!!
person Trelweny
schedule January 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Really intense scenes.

Things really will be different, won't they? Having Harry and Ginny already a couple changes so much alone, but adding in Ron and Susan together during Hogwarts? O_O I can't Wait to see how that changes things.
I do miss Hermione commenting on the twins' genius with the Daydream Charms but I can see how she was distracted and also not so impressed as they were old hat to her.
... I'm guessing no one followed Draco to Borgin & Burkes as Hermione was the only one to see him walking by WWW. I'm guessing he's only working on the cabinet, and won't be bothering with his previous failed attempts on Dumbledore's life?
I know a million things will be changing both intentionally by our sent-back pair and inadvertently but I'm really excited to watch what changes occur and HOW they occur and the changes Because of those changes... :laughs: Time travel ROCKS!!

Thanks so much for writing.
person staar
schedule January 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
OMG their meeting again has me laughing and crying at the same time !!!!!!!!!!! Thanks for the update and see you soon !!!!!
person Trelweny
schedule January 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Well that's certainly interesting about the other souls remembering connections. Could be awfully awkward if EVERYONE could now cross age-lines and cast spells underage though. But the souls remembering despite the time-shift makes sense. In a way. Should be interesting to see Ron's reaction to Susan when they get back to Hogwarts.

I'm trying to label Hermione's emotional state for the 3rd case of playing music. Sort of a hopeful anticipation of seeing missed loved ones? That's a mouthful.

Severus and Narcissa? Not my favorite but... :shrugs: not my story.

Thanks so much for writing.
schedule January 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Awwww, I like happiness. :-) I hope Ron gets his love soon, as his defense of HufflePuff is going to become odd quickly, if he keeps it up. lol I am glad Hermione was able to reign Draco in this time, but I hope they end Voldy quickly, because he is sooooo not cut out to be a spy. lol And, I laughed again at the thought that Narcissa was sending her son off to Hermione so gleefully. Thank you for the happy break from the stress. Looking forward to more soon! HG4eva
person sherlocked17
schedule January 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wonderfully restrained.
Love the plot with their souls remembering and Lucius being in the study, as Narcissa wants to believe.
person Victoria
schedule January 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow, another great chapter full of fantastic sex with Draco complete with soundtrack. I adore how passionate they are together. Excellent choice of songs again, too.