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for Songs of Regret

by RavieSnake

person Trelweny
schedule February 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ouch. :winces: Why should I not be surprised that Dumbledore would try something like that while KNOWING the likely downfalls? Congrats though on managing a believable "nice old man" paired with his cruel "anything for the greater good" traits. Really impressive. As in the books I both like and dislike him. Kudos.

Poor Severus... he gets delegated the worst tasks. But...! at least they weren't going at it on his desk! :laughs: He's more fortunate than Minerva in that matter. :convulses in giggles: Of course She has no idea... and if she walked in on even what Severus just did it could possibly give her a heart attack right there. Dueling to snogging. ^_^ Brilliant. Can't deny passion between them. No way.

...I'm going to be in stitches for a while though, knowing poor Severus is now responsible for seeing that the secret lovers have their rendezvous... :snickers: As if he doesn't have ENOUGH on his plate.

Crush? Really? :nearly loses bladder control from laughing: OMGOSH!!!

I love that they're fated! The explanation of such couples was an added bonus. So... when are Draco and Hermione going to learn this?

Thanks so much for writing!
schedule February 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I just want to give you kudos on that chapter. You wrote it beautifully, because it was clear that, despite his breakdown which was explained, that was two adults having a conversation about adult topics. It could easily have disintegrated if not written well, and you did a heck of a job on it! Brava, my dear!
schedule February 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This story is amazing... I absolutely love it and the plot thus far.
Keep it up!
schedule February 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
No she isn't is she?...
person Anon
schedule February 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Now the headmaster figures it out that they have to be together !!!!!!!!!!!!! Harry need to chill man.......Thanks !!!!!
person monkey23
schedule February 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
OMg its four in the morning I have been up all night reading this I NEED MORE ASAP please... pretty please with a cherry on top...*puppy eyes*
schedule February 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Draco's getting snarky, is it his Deatheaters mark?
person Hinamori
schedule February 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Even though this one was kind of sad, I like the lesson it teaches. There is really no reason a person should let their feelings get the better of them. You never know what you can lose or when. I like that you put in here. With the kind of relationship Draco had with Astoria he would have never learned that life lesson when it came to jealousy.
I also enjoyed how you showed Snape's feelings on the matter. I feeling that given the situation Snaps would really react that way. He was devastated by Lily's death, and I hope he does get to move on from that in your fanfiction. Hi think he deserved happiness, even if that's not how life really works. Look forward to the next update! :)
person staar
schedule February 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
wow so sad !!!!!!!!!hope they get over and on with things !!!!!!! Thanks for the update !!!
person mblaq
schedule February 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
love this story soooooo much! can't wait for the next chapter! : )