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for Songs of Regret

by RavieSnake

schedule April 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Again so much lo e for this...clings to page.
person pickles87
schedule April 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
oh my the past is being altered already...
Now they have to make sure Narcissa is protected.
Why is it I have a feeling that Luc may sacrifice himself to protect Cissa and baby an Snape survives....
waiting for more.
thank you for a Tuesday surprise.
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person Trelweny
schedule April 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
omGOSH! Just... wow. I'm at a loss for words. Simply speechless.
Is it wrong to feel sorry for Lucius, when your Lucius never "got better" in the former-future?

There's going to be a female mini-Severus. And he doesn't love her mother. I guess that's... :sigh: I just wanted happiness for Severus -Lily was never good enough for him imho- but now... well... I guess wait and see.

I did love Draco's "parenthood" speech to Severus. I think Severus finally Fully accepts Draco's maturity and fatherhood status.

Thanks so much for writing!
schedule April 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for clarifying the song. I saw it as soon as I looked up the other song figured it would be the same band.

Oh my....Severus??...

It complicate matters huh!?

Did you listen tok Rammstein Ich Will? It also goes well with the chapter before this.
I'm in a music mood as it is.

Pearl Jam Black is a good one with this. Lucius could feel it all the way from Azkaban.
person starr
schedule April 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
wow things have changed from last time !!!! now Cissy prey's and they found Kralof so that means that either they have a spy or the order was not strong to keep them safe !!!! Thanks for the update I still think that Harry should be told !!!!!!!!!
schedule April 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
OH my god, this is like the best chapter ever!!!
schedule April 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Well! I did NOT see that coming. I hope the child is allowed to be born and then is able to live out her life in a much better world. Thank you! HG4eva
person Victoria
schedule April 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Holy moly that was an intense chapter with a scary ending. Superlative story in every way, every chapter.
schedule April 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Woah!! That was intense!! shewie I'm panting and tense and worried for Draco all at once. Brilliant chapter!

I wonder who has the other elements in the story? Perhaps another fated couple?
schedule April 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I just couldn't get enough! Words can not explain how great this chapter has been. If you don't feel a need to end your story after a billion chapters I won't mind at all! If only Harry Potter had been your baby we would still be reading him today. You would have a series probably on after or before GoT. I love how you gave us a little romance and info after sex and then the shocking truth before the hardcore. Once again Draco is right! If Hermione didn't associate his mask with something other than death and shattered lives than they wouldn't live through the war again. This might lead to a very interesting after battle scene later on. Not that you haven't or have already thought of that particular bit. Finally I'm glad to hear that Ron is not Fated to anyone! That's a purebloods second child snowball's chance situation and it's not to be taken lightly. Ronald Weasley could kill six billion people with the wrong pronunciation. That's a long running joke between my friends when we talk about Ron at anytime or early years Neville.