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I love this story, but it feels like it's dragging. They've been at Hogwarts for a long time, and it feels like the plot is barely moving forward. I understand that you're trying to demonstrate that reliving the past and making small changes can drastically affect what happens, but you've adequately demonstrated that they're in love and are willing to go the distance for each other. Please pick up the pace. The tiny hint of plot movement in each chapter is not enough, and filling it with details on Quidditch tryouts or what Ginny thinks about something is not all that satisfying.

I love this story. I am glad you are continuing to write. I am getting nervous about the recent fluffiness though. It feels like the cal before the storm. I am in nervous jitters that this will end up like the movie Atonement where I am begging for a happy ending even though it is obvious it will be sad. I think I will start begging now, please give Draco and Hermione a happy ending. It would be heartbreaking for them to travel through time, fall in love, go through the whole plan only to die at abattle.

Another thrillingly intense chapter! I felt so sad for both of them, that memory altering stuff is hardcore.
You wrote the emotions beautifully! does Draco have memories of himself tormenting the mudblood or would he just use the original older ones?

What a horrible thing to have to do. I look forward to them making some progress and Harry proving himself to not be the idiot they treat him as. I also kind of hope Hermione starts treating Harry like the friend he's supposed to be. I don't know why, but the ease with which she blew him off in the last chapter and practically praised Draco being such a jerk is still bugging me. They are all on the same side now and it's time Draco acted like the grown up he is and not the snarky jerk he was at 16 with Harry. Anyway... lol I am glad that hurdle is past them, and though I think you have more torture in mind before they make any real progress, I am glad both Harry and Hermione achieved success. Thank you! HG4eva

Ouch Burned hand old Draco would milk it out like there was no tomorrow which back then for him it was possible. I know its about to get bad with all the lovey moments but still Ron.. blah at least she will still have the real memories stashed away... and then I think how bad it must have been for Draco to see Ron with her you know that was killing him.. keep it up

Ah - still loving this story so much!

so cute he'll forgive her if she stokes his hair !!!! just like Draco !!!!!! Thanks for the update !!!!!

Seems rather harsh that Draco demands Hermione NEVER compare him to Ron, even punishes her for it, but then has her replace him with Ron in her memories. That pbviously created some major psychic dissonance. I suppose Ron is the obvious choice to substitute for her lover and a man she would be able to replicate realistically. ...I continue to adore this story and rejoice every time a new chapter is added.

Well Hermione the fire witch, she fled towards their room, she must've known he would follow.

Curious what comes next.

Why you hate Pansy so much?