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July 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
One of my new favourite chapters... The tryouts were a thing of beauty the way you wrote them and the Broom cupboard scene was intensely hot (the way it should be hehe).
I noticed three things: Nott's concerns over Draco's behaviour and how Hermione notices how many things are different this time round. also, it seems the two timelines are still interwoven (Ron's Rosie comment)... Keen to see how you weave these elements into the story :)
I noticed three things: Nott's concerns over Draco's behaviour and how Hermione notices how many things are different this time round. also, it seems the two timelines are still interwoven (Ron's Rosie comment)... Keen to see how you weave these elements into the story :)
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June 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I just finished reading this story. It is amazing. I am an avid reader and immediately fell in love with the concept and characterization of this story. I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the good work!!! Please update soon!!!
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June 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh no, i thought this was complete...not a WIP! I absolutely cannot wait for the next chapter, i'd love to find out how Draco reacts to Hermione's Quidditch tryout. :P This is a great story, spent hours reading the entire thing. Hope you update real soon! :)
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June 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I hope he doesn't get caught nor kill the stupid boy. I would hate for him to miss Hermione's big moment. :-) Thanks! HG4eva
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June 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
As with every chapter in this fic, you weave intrigue, adventure and passion so beautifully into the story! I hope Draco kicks McLaggen's ass! And cannot wait for the tryouts!! Hahaha
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June 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This story made my week! You bring the characters to life, I love every second of it. Thanks for sharing.
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June 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
thank you for the new chapter
it was wonderful
looks like Merrywether is going to get what is coming to him
excited to read about hermione's try out
it was wonderful
looks like Merrywether is going to get what is coming to him
excited to read about hermione's try out
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June 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh, mercy, Draco is going to do something nasty to Cormac and I suspect it has something to do with the 60% of water in his body. Did I read those clues correctly? I wish Draco could do the same to Voldemort but who knows if his resurrected physiology is water or some other nasty substance. I continue to love this story.Every time I see a new chapter I am delighted....Thanks for addressing my questions about Hermione replacing Draco with Ron in her occlumency lesson.
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June 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
i cant wait to see look on Draco's face when he sees Hermione try out for the Gryffindor Quiddich team, and Mclaggen deserves whatever it is that Draco dishes out to him, and i do hope that Draco and Hermione get to go public soon, they deserve to show their love in public and not have to hide it
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June 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
omGOSH... the ideas of what Draco might do with his water control and the human body... Airbender and Kitara's blood-bending skill last season come to mind.
Quiditch tryout next! Booyaka! I'm actually looking forward to them for a change.
LOVED your take on Luna. Her new creature is awesome. Purple and yellow... too much fun. I like the idea that she can see things others can't, not that she's insane. Why not?
Thanks so much for writing.
Quiditch tryout next! Booyaka! I'm actually looking forward to them for a change.
LOVED your take on Luna. Her new creature is awesome. Purple and yellow... too much fun. I like the idea that she can see things others can't, not that she's insane. Why not?
Thanks so much for writing.