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I just finished the chapter where everyone finds out that Narcissa is pregnant. From the title I expected that Hermione was going to be the one pregnant so I'm glad to find out that it wasn't here and what a surprise that plot twist was :) Very well done.

They wonder why this happened this time around but I think they are missing something (which will probably come out in later chapters maybe). When Hermione first met Harry at the Burrow, he reacted in a way that indicated he felt something between them (attraction, guilt and I forget the last thing)but nothing really came of that because he next reacted more strongly to Ginny obviously because they had a lot more history. And it jump started their relationship faster than what had happened in the other timeline. Same thing with Ron and Neville.

I'm not sure why it happened that way but if Snape had slept with Narcissa for whatever reason before... then they would have the same reaction and if nothing else interfered (like when Harry met Ginny again) then it would not happpen in the same way but it would happen much sooner. Maybe in the original timeline it was a punishment that Voldemort forced on them, or maybe it was something that happened as things got worse in the manor, or when Lucius came home but wasn't quite right anymore. I don't think it would have happened early like this originally because Voldemort just moved in and Narcissa would have been lonely without Lucius but not desperately lonely or anything yet.

They won't ever know how it originally happened, but I think it would be a comfort at least to Severus and Nacissa that something else was helping the intimacy along and that they probably didn't originally react this way.

wow... this story is just so amazing. I've been ready it for hours over the past couple days to catch up. So freakin' wonderful!!!

Excellent plot twist to allow them some space to openly be together! Interesting that Ron is handling everything so much more maturely than I suspect he would have the first time round. I like that it possibly points to him and Hermione possibly being friends back in the future.

Keep writing please! :) you are doing a great thing here to squeeze this in with the rest of life!

I'm crying too darn it

Wonderful story. Pls don't abandon it, I'd gladly keep checking back for more.

omfg, you are a legend hon, thank you for updating when you can, fact is, i always refresh the page just to see if there is another chapter to read, honestly this is one of the best Dramione fics i have ever read, and i just finished rereading from the beginning, i literally love this story, and most of the time i'd be hating on Ron a lot, but i love how you have Ron a bit more mature and accepting, and cool headed at times... but thank you for writing the stories that you do, keep on writing hon, you definitely have pure writing skills and talent for sure... anyways hon, keep up the good work, and looking forward to the next upcoming chapters as well and i cant wait to see how the new mission goes and the reactions of the all the others when they finally realized that Dramione are a couple :D

I PM'd you in FFnet. i would really want an alert notification.
your Voldy is really cruel. the death eaters should all be happy that Draco controls water and not fire because they would be crispy by now.
this is a pretty dark chapter and the separation scene gripped my heart. i love that you did not make Ron a complete waste of space.
i hope you'll update soon.

Wow. Another amazing chapter! Poor Draco must have been in agony. I can't wait to see how everyone reacts to Draco and Hermione's relationship. I can't wait to read the next chapter!

I read this story religiously...can't wait to see more!

Well, now this should make things easier. lol I say that, but I don't believe it. :-) Thanks for the update, hon! HG4eva