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Oh, this is getting so exciting! I'm not a fan of most fanfic sites other than ao3 and ff.net (my eyes favor the option of black background with white text). Black text on Yellow is tolerable enough I suppose. So far I'm happy to have found this story and I'm curious to know what else Dramione I've never read that are posted here. I won't bother perusing through the fics yet since yours has captivated me thus far.

Loved Draco's antics, him not feeling right, that was funny, Hermione is so understanding.

Not sure about the second set of friends though...

Thank you!! That was the most positive chapter this story has had, I think. :-) I am glad Harry was wary and needed proof. It showed, despite the others' disgruntled responses to him, that he's maturing and not rushing in headlong into action. :-) I look forward to seeing the rest of the school's reactions. lol Thank you!! HG4eva

Great chapter!!
So glad I found this fanfic! Loving it :)

Update soon!

It was difficult to read about yet another bout of debilitating pain for Draco. Could you let him be completely healthy for a while? You describe it so vividly that I wince when he goes through all of it.I hope Hermione's fire ability allows her to do some sort of complete cure for Draco's nerve damage. This continues to be a fabulous story.

So awesome. I think Theo is going to wonder what's going on because I think he observes a lot.

You know, this is one of the few stories where I just don't know what to say, and that is a rare occurrence indeed! Very, VERY well written. Engaging from the start and good character development/story advancement. I love how most of the sex scenes in here I'm actually lend to the story and advance it in some way (not that SOME gratuitous sex isn't fun). Most writers seem to have lost that art, but you have nailed it right on the head.

You'll be pleased to know that my husband and I like this story so much, we frequently complain that we've reached the end and have to wait for updates. He is currently rereading it, and I'm about to do the same.

Anyway, Bravo to you for such a well - done story. Can't wait to read the next chapters!!!

thank you for updating AND for the PM, very much appreciated.
i can't believe what Draco did, he was acting like a horny teen but with some Slytherin style to it, i love it.
i knew he was faking it! and when Hermione almost squeezed the living daylight out of HIM, it actually made me laugh.
i'm still hoping there would be someone in Slytherin that would become an ally to the couple.
i'm really not thrilled with Susan, she is such a Hufflepuff and even her patronus is like it belongs but not.
the song choice was good but i got a bit distracted because it is the opening theme of Supernatural so as i'm playing it while reading, the Winchesters,
pop in now and then and it's not cool because of the situation, lol.
nevertheless i enjoyed this chapter especially the last part.

I'm sad to say this story has captivated me like very few others. The style of wiring this author has displayed, to me, feels almost as authentic as jk herself was writing it. While she wouldn't have included the sex scenes and language, I feel these are an intagral and would be lessor without them.
Author: please let me know if you can when the next exciting chapter is ready, I VERY much am looking forward to it. Johnavich at gmail dot com

Hiii,
I'm new on adult fan fiction and this is one of the first fanfic I've read on this site and I have to say it's amazing!!! I literally read the whole thing in a day and I'm just sooo super excited to read the next chapter. I hope you update soon. Also, I'm not sure how the update system works on this site, but will I get a notification when you next update this story? Or do I just have to check every couple of days?

Anyways, brilliant work and your writing is extremely good and captivating.
Love this! xD

Eagerly awaiting for the next chapter!