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for Songs of Regret

by RavieSnake

person Guest654
schedule October 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm. Well that was quick, but understandable in a weird way. Though the music ability threw me off. I know it emphasizes the title of your story but I didn't think it would be so... literal...
person Guest654
schedule October 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I just realized Draco lacks that bit of Slytherin charm while interacting with people lol. Also, his lack of eloquence with words fits a teenager rather than a gentleman pushing forty. I know they've regressed back to teenagers, but shouldn't their speech pattern and their mannerism reflect their maturity? I know the way I hold myself now and the way I interact with people has improved greatly from when I was 15/16. It would have been amusing if Draco offered Hermione wine or champagne with their evening meal and she reminds him they are too young to be drinking or something silly like that.
person Guest654
schedule October 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I just realized Draco lacks that bit of Slytherin charm while interacting with people lol. Also, his lack of eloquence with words fits a teenager rather than a gentleman pushing forty. I know they've regressed back to teenagers, but shouldn't their speech pattern and their mannerism reflect their maturity? I know the way I hold myself now and the way I interact with people has improved greatly from when I was 15/16. It would have been amusing if Draco offered Hermione wine or champagne with their evening meal and she reminds him they are too young to be drinking or something silly like that.
person Guest654
schedule October 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, I enjoy a mystery or two or three or more.
person Guest654
schedule October 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I sure hope they don't have those twin babies that quickly. They'll be in the middle of a war soon. XD
person guest654
schedule October 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Interesting set up chapter. That pearl does sound dangerous to me. I wonder what would happen if they activate it.
person Guest 654
schedule October 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ouch, breakup is so difficult to experience in rl. That you know something's not alright and there is nothing you could do to fix it because your partner dosen't want to put the effort into it. Sad, sad, sad.
person Guest 654
schedule October 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the A.N. about the two-faced thing. I was trying to recall where that comment derived from. Their lives are all so messed up at the moment. I'm surprised that Harry and Ginny hadn't caught wind of the marital problems.
person Guest 654
schedule October 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that's a rather nifty charm to have for a shop. If every store had those implemented, transactions would go much smoother for both employees and customers. Though, I'm sure it would be considered a violation to privacy.
person Guest654
schedule October 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
What a turn of events. Makes me worried about what happens next.