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person Elettra21
schedule March 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Such a beautif chapter. Thank you for this story. Can't wait to read more.
schedule March 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I adore this story. It is sweet and a lott of awkwardness around not enough to make it too painful to read. But the edge is there....
schedule March 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Thank you! I believe that was your most hopeful chapter yet. :-) I am sorry her parents can't seem to forgive her, though I can understand their hurt, and I am really glad her father showed how much he loved and missed her anyway. I can't imagine a mother shutting the door in her own daughter's face, poor Hermione. I am thrilled she called Draco and asked him to come for support. It shows more of her love of him than anything she could have said. YAY! Thank you, HG4eva
person starr
schedule February 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
OMG these two take one step forward and then 50 back....their insecurities are too much for both of them...they need to let go of things !!!! Thanks for the update (even thou i missed it ) :):):):):)):)
person Malfoy'sgirl
schedule February 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Hiii!!! This chapter was worth the wait. I loved Hermione's interaction with Narcissa. She seemed supportive of her son's relationship with Hermione and also appreciative of Hermione's skill. But their love faces some serious obstacles now. Hope they can overcome it all. Especially when both are now so dependent on the other's love.
I wish Hermione is able to resolve whatever is wrong between her and her parents. It was very good to see Harry come to terms with everything and be repentant for his behaviour in the past.
Don't make us wait for long. Update soon
schedule February 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Draco you arse! Hermione is yours.

Hahaha, without a bumpy ride the story would be over wouldn't it?
schedule February 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Sadly, turning one's life around and making yourself happy isn't as easy as it sounds, so I am not surprised she is backsliding. But, I hope Draco can show her that couples fight, people disagree, and things don't always go as planned, BUT they can still be happy together and get past it together. I don't know what you have planned for her and her parents, but I really do hope they aren't unforgiving jerks. I understand they were hurt and scared by what she did, but she is their daughter. I want them to try with her, so that she can get back some of what she lost in herself without them. I liked the interaction with Narcissa and her understanding of the situation, despite her feelings on Hermione's "unfortunate" birth. lol Thanks, hon!!! HG4eva
person ilariasantaniello
schedule February 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
mammina bella che tristezza, povera herm povera cucciola, questo capitolo era dolce e triste allo stesso tempo per
person Trelweny
schedule February 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
ouch. And the roller coaster sinks into a low point. :winces:

It seemed to be going so Well at St. Mungo's too.

I hope Draco can make up for what he said to Hermione before break...

Thanks so much for writing.
person General Crow
schedule February 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Where to start?

Glad Hermione and Harry patched things up. They had been through too much to let things go on as bad as it did. Yes, Harry had more on his plate than anyone else, but that didn't mean it was all about him. Where ever there is oppression there will be others who will fight for freedom even if their names will never end up in the history books. I'm very happy for their closure.

Dreams always have a way of making unknown feelings known. Seeing how Draco reacted to Harry's visit, his flat not being a true home to her, his choices for her, and OF COURSE the debt she owes him; Hermione will never feel secure in this relationship. This chapter again proves my point that she will never fully commit to Draco until this debt is no longer hanging over her head.

I'm nervous about Hermione seeing her parents. A part of me is hoping that it will be a happy reunion and complete understanding for both parties. Yet, I fear Hermione will leave more heart broken than before. Good luck Hermione.

Hopefully, this break from each other will give them both a chance to clear their heads. That is if Draco will be able to sleep without Hermione laying next to him. That boy really is in love, but can he love her the right way?

As for my aunt, not able to do assistant living home, but we now have more people coming in to check on her more frequently. She still is in good spirits. Thank you for asking.