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person Herzen
schedule April 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I smell a possible sequel! Amazing story and I loved the way it was written.
person Trelweny
schedule April 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Lovely epilogue. Absolutely lovely. Olivia is a surprising delight.

Thank you for a wonderful reading experience.
person ilariasantaniello
schedule April 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
OH MIO DIO!!! Cara sono triste questa storia
person General Crow
schedule April 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
A beautiful end to a beautiful story.

It's great to see Mom and Dad Granger had become more accepting of Hermione. I love little Leo and the house elves.

It was lovely with Olivia and the surprise of Baby Sissy. As someone with step-parents, believe me when I say strong bonds can still be made even if there is no blood connection. And that no matter how updated medicine as become, the body still has ways of healing itself, even though it takes time.

To your response. Thank you for your kind words. Thank you for giving me a chance to let that load (thought not all it) I was carrying about my aunt off my shoulders. I look forward to your new story, and will review as soon as the first chapter comes up.

Good Luck and Great Job.
person flubberyflobberworms
schedule April 13, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this so much! It was absolutely wonderful and the pacing was really good as well, imo. I was slightly put off by the premise and how Draco had to sort of blackmail and sort of trick her into staying with him but I think you explained how they overcame the problem and talked things out well :) Can't wait to read the epilogue!
Thank you so much for writing and sharing your work~
person Anna
schedule April 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This is incredibly well-written, and your characters became real to me. Your talent is immense.
person Trelweny
schedule April 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
... that was weird... review didn't post -it was like refreshing the page. But nothing was said about missing the Captcha or anything. huh.
Figures it would be the one time I forgot to copy paste my post before sending the review. nerf.

Loved how you revisited the tattoos! I don't know why I was surprised Draco got one based off Hermione's marker drawings but it works so beautifully. Will it be further elaborated to Hermione about the significance of them sharing the runes?

I'm not sure why I was stunned that they moved from the flat to the dorms, as it was pretty much slated to happen last chapter, but I had to blink and blink again while reading that section. Probably just because I'm that tired...

Thanks so much for writing!
person Malfoy'sgirl
schedule April 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
That was such a lovely chapter!! Their wedding ceremony was beautiful, with all their friends and both their parents. It was good to see Charlotte and Benjamin Granger making efforts to forget about the past and grace their daughter's wedding in the magical world. Same for Lucius too. I loved Ginny's present the most at Hermione's bridal shower. I really liked the idea of a relationship between Parvati and Theo.
It was great to read about Harry and Luna on their adventurous trip. Harry's gift was also quite thoughtful.
I feel really awful that the story's just about to end with the next chapter.
Hope u plan to write more in future. Your fanfics are really different from the other senseless stuff available gete nd on other sites.
Update soon😘
person General Crow
schedule April 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
To your response. At that age I didn't know divorce even existed until it happened to my parents, so that really pull the rug out from under me. It was really my younger (full blooded) brother that made me grow up fast due to his special needs. As for my father, well, I lost the desire to rebuild the strong relationship we once had, and it's no big deal to me. Is that sad? But I still love and respect him.

Harry. They say good things come to those who wait, but that doesn't mean good things will wait for you. Although, good things come in packages you never see coming. Sad that he couldn't make to the wedding.

Hen/Stag Night. Ooooh, kinky presents. Blaise, if you're gonna wear nipple rings, be careful of strong magnets.

Wedding. Beautiful. Draco's tattoo almost made me cry. Glad all parents were accounted for. Mostly importantly, everyone behaved like mature adults. What sort of plants are in Neville's garden, because I think that might be the reason why the wedding went off without a hitch.

Apartment. Welcome Home Hermione and Draco Malfoy
schedule April 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Loved it. This story was so sweet as was the One before. Are You writing another one? I Will definitely read it thanks for the !!

Oh and you went naughty, clamps, polaroids, sex book. Would have loved to have seen what they would do with them .