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by cpetnm

person sherlocked17
schedule December 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I love their awkwardness. It is both painful and endearing at the same time. You're good at describing scene's and feelings....
person Trelweny
schedule December 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Haha! I love that Draco can tell the truth there at the end, if only because he never plans on such a situation to occur. Brilliant.

...soooo.... apparently the university is overlooking attacks on the former DeathEater, hm? Not surprising, I guess, but I'm sure in the long run Hermione won't stand for it. This time she was understated in her diffusing of the situation, which I thought was perfect in its simplicity, but I'm sure as more incidents happen (and Draco wriggles into her heart despite her resistance more and more) she'll turn to stronger retaliations.

Loved the letters. Surprised RON took things so well. Neville's revelation was... Unexpected. I like that Draco was already trying to do good, even if only he and Neville knew. Actually... I like it better that way.

Loved the intimate scene. It seemed to read quicker than last chapter's though, making it feel shorter in time.

Thanks so much for writing!
person staar
schedule December 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
they are both falling for each other ...and Harry again he is going to be an ass !!!!! Shocked at Ron 's understanding !!!!!!! good update...thanks for it....so people still attack Draco so dumb of them....
schedule December 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I am glad he is growing to really learn who she is and is appreciating her. I am sad for her to be so unhappy and unable to internally accept how great she is and that she's finally getting some of the happiness she deserves. I loved the letters, as they showed the friends she has are mostly people who have her best interest at heart. I want to smack Harry. lol Thanks! HG4eva
person ilariasantaniello
schedule December 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah questo capitolo
schedule December 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
IDK why, i really love all of ur story.
draco falling in love with hermione right?
seriously, everyday I will check this story, hoping you will update soon. hahaha. nice job anyway
schedule December 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I wonder how long before he realizes that getting to know her and really like her is different than his previous infatuation. I also think she is going to fall harder than she ever thought possible. I hope they find true happiness in one another, since it appears they really have no one else. Thanks for the update!! HG4eva
person Malfoy'sgirl
schedule December 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Finally!!!! An update. Thanks a lot, cpetnm. Well, I understand that you have a life apart from writing fanfics but.... I can't help it. The story's just so good I can't help but ask for more.
As for this chapter, as brilliant as always. And the description of the food had me drooling. I couldn't help but notice how very cruel Hermione's patents are. So, it's good she has someone in the form of Draco. The other Slytherins were so different from their portrayal in other fanfics. But it wasn't OOC. Slytherins are intellectually better than Gryffindors. Last but most definitely not the least, the hot scene at the end of the chapter stole the show. With the promise of more to come, I am not sure how I am going to control myself from pestering you continuously to update. I think I should start right away. Please please please update really very soon.
person ilariasantaniello
schedule December 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow tesoro qui le cose incominciano a farsi bollenti e accidenti!!! Draco ed hermione insieme sono fantastici davvero intelligenti belli inoltre draco
person Naughty_megs
schedule December 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
HOT!