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by cpetnm

schedule December 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
hahaha, it's okay. I'd love to check your story everyday xp
person sherlocked17
schedule December 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Merlin's balls that was hot....

Sad to read that Harry was using her and her not getting out of it other than defeating Voldemort.....
person Malfoy'sgirl
schedule December 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Thank you, Cpetnm for those awesome words at the beginning of the chapter.
I feel so very bad for Harry and Hermione's broken relationship. But then, with what they did it was bound to happen. I just loved how Draco tried to make Hermione feel better by bringing her together with her girl friends. I wonder how long it would take for them to realize how deeply they feel for each other. But it's good how you let them take their time. I just think that isn't it now time for Draco's snappy, arrogant nature to come to the fore. I mean, I know that this time you have portrayed him as redeemed but he still has not got rid of his inner demons. So, it would be natural for him to lose his cool. What do you think??
Lastly, as always I would request you to update asap. Thanks!!!
person ilariasantaniello
schedule December 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
porca miseria!!!! tesoro mio sei un genio malefico scrivi le scene hot cos
person lexiatel
schedule December 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
he's so sweet :)
schedule December 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for another lovely update! If I didn't know how he felt and that his feelings were growing, I would feel badly for her. lol But, as I do know, I just hope she allows herself to believe in it all when the truth is revealed. I know she's not ready to yet, but I hope he continues to prove himself to her, so she can relax and learn to truly love someone. I LOVE Luna!! Thank you again! HG4eva
person Trelweny
schedule December 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm surprised Hermione showed and fell prey to jealousy so quickly. Seems she's already more emotionally entangled than she wants to admit.

Loved the girls' day! Surprised to see Lavender included without Parvati (unless Parvati fell during the war... :sweatdrops: ). Always thrilled to see Luna not overlooked. Bugs me when Luna's dropped from a HP fic not only cause I adore her but because she'd never abandon her friends and that shouldn't be forgotten. Even if she is relegated to cameos and single moments of wtf. ;)

This couple really is too cute together. Even if they're not yet really together. It'll be a wild ride!

Thanks so much for writing.
person staar
schedule December 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
so Draco really loves here or what >>>>????? harry is an ass in this one ! thanks for the update
person Malfoy'sgirl
schedule December 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great!!!! But again, that was expected. I could not believe the way Harry reacted to Hermione and Draco's relationship. Neville's revelation about Draco's helpful role at Hogwarts was
Quite an eye opener. It was also interesting to see how Draco is benefitting from their trlationship, apart from the obvious sexual pleasures. The intimate scene towards the end was like cherry on the cake😜
Lastly, please update soon
person Sherlocked17
schedule December 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hiya, I want to contact you about some pointers. my email is in my profile page.