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by cpetnm

person sherlocked17
schedule December 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love Luna she is so use. Liked the party.

Love the sexiness of the carters. You definitely know how to make great anticipation and expectation. But I'm aching now how he plays with the carters and let it lead to some more hotness.
I know you feel you have difficulty writing that side of the story but you have shown you can do it....
person sherlocked17
schedule December 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Use has to be wise....
person Mocha Midnight
schedule December 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!!
person Malfoy'sgirl
schedule December 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
O Yayyy!!! An update. Luna was absolutely strange and weird in this one, but in a good way. How she always comes up with the right thing to say amazes me. The way Harry's falling apart is just breaking my heart. I hope you have something nice in store for him. Draco is so obviously head over heels for Hermione. Hope she gets over her reservations soon.
Thanks for the chapter and don't take too long for the next one.
schedule December 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for that glimpse of how her friends see and treat her. :-) And, Draco is amazing with Hermione and knowing what she needs to hear and what she needs! I love Luna and feel badly for Ginny. But, I hope Harry gets the help he so badly needs. Thank you for another lovely chapter, HG4eva Happy New Year!
person staar
schedule December 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
he final said it , in a round about way ...he loves her...hope that she can just let it happen....thanks for the update !!!!!!
schedule December 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ah so living and just ask around fun. I'm to see how harry reacts at the next meeting. So much fun yay
person General Crow
schedule December 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
OK, I just read all the chapters who wrote so far, and I am very impressed. It shows that everyone has a way of handling the situations life throws at them. Some good and some bad. And having just one person who will be there for you is the greatest thing you can ask for. Now Harry is just pushing away the ones most dearest and loyal to him, and is in serious need of an honest-to-God intervention; good luck guys.

Question: Are Hermione's parents so willing to cut her out of their lives that they don't care that they will never see her graduate, get married, or see her pregnant with their grandchild/grandchildren? If Hermione got into a serious accident where she was in critical condition, would they even care?

PS: I'm willing to bet that if Hermione asked Draco to marry her, he would most likely carry off to the nearest alter before she changes her mind.
person Trelweny
schedule December 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
On one of your notes (not to me) I think you did a really good job on the tattooing for one who hasn't gotten one. I've one, and it's the only one I have. I designed it when I was 13, redesigned it at 16, then finally had it inked when I was 21 so it has a LOT of significance to me. My personal advice to anyone considering a tattoo is to get something Really Meaningful and to Really think about it to be Really sure. Mine was 6 hours of pain but I consider it totally worth it. Plus I get the story of being able to amuse my tattoo artist by singing "the last unicorn" while he worked. :laughs:
Draco and Hermione getting theirs to cover and heal I feel makes theirs absolutely worth it, even if Draco was near spur-of-the-moment with his. Advice can't be tailor made for Everyone, after all. ;)

Wow... Harry's worse off than I would have guessed. Pushing away the Weasleys? Choosing to be Alone? Not things I would have thought he'd want. Is it just his way of showing PTSD or is there something... worse?
I'm glad Hermione won't visit him on her own. Taking Luna with is brilliant, possible romantic involvement or not. I'd rather not... but not my fanfic! ;)

I love Nevile and Luna in canon and I continue to love them here! <3 So perceptive... and honestly caring for their friends. It's heartwarming. And fun where Luna's concerned. With the way you wrote her Luna's speech and actions were just enough to keep her Luna while allowing us (the readers) to see what we wanted to see. If that makes any sense. ;)

IS there something in your take on the wizarding world with matching runes? Look forward to discovering that!

oh gosh oh gosh oh gosh! I can't believe Draco confessed like that! But... will Hermione catch on or will her negative view towards love basically have her glossing over it?
Draco's advice right before it was pretty deep. I really enjoyed their conversation. The smexy scene turned into something beautifully tender seamlessly.

Thanks so much for writing.
person MargeW76
schedule December 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm sooooo glad he finally admitted his feelings to her. I hope she believes him and doesn't throw it back in his face. I appreciate her love = loss; however, I like that Draco countered by telling her she can't control others feelin s and it won't always end in loss. I also adore how perceptive Luna is. I like that it was Luna that opened Hermione's eyes to DrCo's feelings. Hoping Luna can rehab Harry back into a decent friend and give him someone to love. Can't wait to read more!!!