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for Ghost Magic

by Sealpotter

person Kat
schedule November 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ohh, noo!!! How are the Malfoy's gonna take it? And the Aurors? Ohh, noo!!
schedule November 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I like this. I'll be watching for your updates. Looks like I have a story to bookmark!
person snape_lust
schedule November 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really like the premise and the beginning. I could totally feel harry's apathy and wish for oblivion.

I'm conflicted though on the bonding and expectation that "poof, we're bonded now. No need to acknowledge the hurt, humiliation, bullying, malice, abuse of power and scorn we both have delivered unto you Harry. Nothing to see here, let's move along"

Yes, after such traumatic events in the war, past hurts might seem insignificant, but it just seems too neat and tidy you know? Again, I'm conflicted. I want Harry happy and loved but from personal experience, bullying leaves deep scars and intense mistrust. Sure, one can put it in the past, but trusting my former abusers, opening up and being vulnerable for them to crush once again, not so much. Trust and forgiveness are earned, not just bestowed from outside sources IMHO.

I guess you're doing something right as a writer because I'm totally engaged and thinking about these characters :-)

Can't wait for more!
person djaddict
schedule November 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Of course you end the chapter there, you meanie!

I think I figured out most of the sorting hat's "riddle" but have enough questions that I am sure to be surprised.

Enjoying.
person elisabetta
schedule November 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
this story is very wonderfoul
person Samantha
schedule November 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love it.
person staar
schedule November 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
so sad that even when the founders told him all that...that Harry still does not believes in him.....thank god Sev is the old wise one here and understands it////man svn Draco gets some of it .....OMG I 'm going to go nuts waiting for your next update !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! so no update for Fate Falls you meanie !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule November 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
eeeek!!!!! Soooo I was a little apprehensive about reading this(if you see my most recent review to Sanctuary you'll understand why.) but I decided to give it a whirl and omg I love it! Soo, since I started it, I think i'll be able to read it no matter who is top or whatever. :D. Btw, just a heads up...You Are Awesome! XD
schedule November 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
0.o!!!! Can't wait to find out what's going onn!
schedule November 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Why would you end it there? Whhhyyyy?? Hope you're gonna be posting soon! This is great. I'm intrigued by the bond, waiting patiently to see how everything works out. :)