ch 2: well well well. I've not seen a fan fic that brought up that speech before.
ch 3 Yea I kinda felt sorry for Draco in the last couple of movies.
ch 4 woo hoo for Fawkes.
That was a beautiful ending, loved it!
Very cute and sweet.
holly shit that was hot.......man o man can;t get over that !!!! they really brouth harry back can't wait for the next one !!!!!! thanks for the update !!:):):)
Well, that was short... Just something that sometimes irks me but I do it anyway, there are too many Harry-sleeping scenes and the more you use those scenes as a sweet scene, the more monotonous it is to read. Just saying. (And I enjoyed this immensely, don't get me wrong)
I've only made it to chapter 7 so far. However, the story seems pretty boring. Where's the drama? Conflict? Adventure? Everyone just stands around and talks about their feelings. This is fine for a chapter or two, then it gets boring. Aren't your characters going to do anything?
beautiful and i cant wait for more :)
Now that is the way to come out of a fugue state! nice!