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for "Unanswered Prayers"

by T-W-O

schedule November 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
So, your storytelling is so good that I have been hitting refresh for the last day. lol I was thrilled to see this chapter pop up today. And, I hope Severus is going to handle things correctly now. And, Ron?! An infection and bruises?! You unbelievable arse! What the heck is wrong with you?! Sigh... Okay, Sev... time to give up on the idea of dying and get on with finally living! Thank you again! HG4eva
schedule October 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is a fantastic tale and I am even more impressed that it's just pouring out of you like this! I look forward to the rest and whether or not she truly believes she's "in love" with Ron still. Thank you and keep up the great work! HG4eva
schedule October 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I am thrilled that you are updating so quickly, but I am so sad for them right now. And, I'm angry with Severus for not at least telling her what's happening. He claims to be doing it for own good, but does she seem happy, healthy, and whole?! Severus, dammit, man up! Thank you, hon! HG4eva
schedule October 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is really good! I only just found it and managed to dash through everything you have posted in one sitting. Excellent writing, the plot is a good one, and the characterization is spot on. I've enjoyed every minute of it so far and I am looking forward to reading more soon. Thanks for sharing and please, if you can, update the rest of the story now. LOL! Just kidding, but I wouldn't be upset if you updated again as quickly as possible.