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for You Complete Me

by Giovanna

person staar
schedule October 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I know you will be gone but just wanted to say thanks for the update!!!!!!!!! loved it see you !!!!!!!
schedule October 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
heheheh! Awesome chap. Love the badass!Harry. xD. Your dark!Harry version is really good. Hope Sev eventually gets himself together, he would be amazing in Harry's pack. :). Truly can't wait for more.
person autumngold
schedule October 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Incredible new chapters! I am so glad, hopefully, that Severus won't run and tell Dumbledore what is happening with Harry. Your Dumbledore is one creepy guy. Of course, him and Molly together really make sense. With his twinkley eyes, and her loud mouth, they make the perfect couple. Excellent new chapters! Can't wait for more!
person Meiya
schedule October 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Haha poor sev in last chapter, hope he can change his mind and help harry now that the masks are off. Love the Alpha idea and so glad greyback isnt the alpha any more :D yay lots of chapters to come :) cant wait!
schedule October 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Nice!!!! xD
schedule October 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
oooo! I'm loving this so far. :)
schedule October 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Pretty interesting. Excited to know what that was all about.
schedule October 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
omfg!!!!!did not see that Molly/Dumbledore, although i must admit i threw up in my mouth a little. ugh! glad Remus is on Harry's side. Hope Arthur finds out soon. I'm really enjoying this story right now and i hope i continue to do so. :)
schedule October 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm a little 'meh' about the transformations, does that make Bill the Potter heir now? And I thought it was a bit much but it's your story and I am still in love with it despite that. Can't wait for more Tom/Harry interactions. Btw Arthur is a b****. lol! Hope you show his reactions when he finally sees Molly's betrayal.
schedule October 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love your fic.......i love a dark harry especially when he's dark but not evil I love a neutral harry with a dark side he's always awesome that way can't wait to see where you go from here please please please please please update soon......the lemon was awesome