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Unfortunately, tired or not, Harry cannot be 'done' with this. If he flees, they (the Ministry or the Unseen) will hunt him down. If he stays, he will have to be involved in taking care of the Unseen somehow, someway to make sure that nothing like this ever happens again.
He cannot just say "I am finished with all this!" and I think somewhere in his heart of hearts, he knows this.
The Ministry is going to have to rethink their whole "Dark = Evil" nonsense and think about "Dark or Light, anyone can be evil and we only punish people for WHAT THEY ACTUALLY DO IN REAL LIFE!"

Those people in the courtroom are so stupid! Harry didn't do anything wrong and it's still not enough. Stupid stupid people.

Yay! Thanks for your permission. I wish there is a way to let you know if even Italians appreciate your story. If there is any way to give to you their comments just let me know and I will do whatever it takes. I'm really happy about it. Keep going with your fan fictions, maybe I will translate also something else. If you have any suggestions just tell me, also if you want some stories to be translated. Thank you so much, luv u <3

Yes... this chapter helps A LOT :) Those unseen are totally creepy and unless they can be arrested or something I don't see them wanting to give up on taking Harry's magic because lets face it... they are used to doing whatever they want. Whether Harry is welcome back in society or not he will still probably have to be on watch or somewhere protected or not obvious because who knows how many of those people are around. I liked Hermione and Ron being shocked to find out that Harry and Draco are a couple :)

about #40...

Offend J.G.??? I'll throw a monkey at him, then hide behind Harry & Draco. :-)

Anyway, as intriguing & exciting this story is getting, I can't help BUT wonder how
Fenrir ['blanking on his last name'] is dealing with the blow that his Lord wasn't....his Lord.
Kinda feeling sorry right now.

What a great story!

Hmm well that meeting could have gone better. Neither side seemed willing to put past prejudices aside to come to a common goal. Hermione and Ron want to lay it safe but only because they don't have the full story on what Harry went through and Draco is unwilling to divulge any secrets due to innate slytherin paranoia

Now this line: "Are you always this slow to follow Harry? Or do you not trust him to know what he

#39...

I don't like Jungle George, nuff said.

Hey there! I'm Parselmouth, nice to meet you. I have already finished to read your fan fiction and I don't know what to say. First of all, my first language is not English, so I don't know if I can speak properly, but indeed I understood your story and also enjoyed it. Forgive me if I make some mistakes. You are awesome, I loved every inch of this fan fiction. At the beginning I hated how Harry was acting, but I loved him then. The way he supposed to be the Dark Lord totally captured me. I laughed quite much as well. I also think that Draco had an important role in Harry's decisions and in his way of thinking. But, this time, instead of loving Draco's character I loved Harry 's,that is unusual for me. Besides I really liked the idea of the Lightfinder and all the concerned it. I spent five days reading this fan fiction and it was worth it. You did a wonderful job. I would also like to translate it in Italian and post it on an Italian site called "efp fan fiction.net". Of course only with your permission. If you allow me to do so I will be really thankful and joyful about it,and other people will be while reading your fan fiction. It is really great, I swear. Well, I don't know what else to say, it's really hard to write in a language different from yours. Thank you for your time, I'll wait for your reply.

Something tells me that the Unseen are NOT directing the future towards a 'good future' but what they personally want it to be. Really hoping that Harry's magic lashes out and fries them this time.