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October 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 1&2
Well, this is promising to be a real page-turner. Uh, so to speak. I think that what Harry ought to do now is demand that others besides himself go under the Lightfinder. After all, don't they need test subjects??? *innocent blink*
Well, this is promising to be a real page-turner. Uh, so to speak. I think that what Harry ought to do now is demand that others besides himself go under the Lightfinder. After all, don't they need test subjects??? *innocent blink*
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October 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about #2..
This is almost a tricky subject matter. How do you convince paranoid wizards that testing
dark doesn't exactly equals you being a 'dark wizard'.
This is almost a tricky subject matter. How do you convince paranoid wizards that testing
dark doesn't exactly equals you being a 'dark wizard'.
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October 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
So, a person's aura = whether they are evil or not? Hell no, it more speaks to them being better at certain types of magic than others. I.E. better at defensive magic than offensive, better at spells that harm instead of those that heal.
That does not and never will equate to 'good' or 'evil'.
That does not and never will equate to 'good' or 'evil'.
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October 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful start to a story and written very well grammatically and interestingly to catch a reader's attention. I'll certainly be looking out for this story's updates in future! Keep up the good work!
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October 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hmm interesting start, but couldn't they just chalk it up to Harry having had a piece of Voldemort's soul attached to him or did I miss something? And if Draco and is friends want to walk about without getting harassed wouldn't a glamor be better than dressing like a death eater or something similar to one lol?
Curious to see where this goes.
-waits patiently for the next chapter-
Curious to see where this goes.
-waits patiently for the next chapter-
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October 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
lol really now Harry... did you really think you would be a paragon of the light when everyone who played a major role in the war (Dumbledore, Snape, YOU)had hard choices to make that didn't always play on the side of what's 'fair'? Because face it... Harry and Snape lived a lifetime of 'unfair' and Draco and his sort fell under that category of lives pointed down a certain dark path whether they thought about that or not.
Really... this is very interesting. Watch out Harry... should have paid a bit more attention to that meeting lol.
Really... this is very interesting. Watch out Harry... should have paid a bit more attention to that meeting lol.
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October 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Aww man, governments and their "preventative measures"......
The question is, how far will they want to go to prevrnt another DL to rise?
Anyways, Harrys Aura being blue-black doesn't sound so good. Not like I'm surprisd, mind you. Afer his life...
'Sides what does Kings expect? Red is probably the colour of some poor innocent wizard who never had to lose his innocence as young as Harry. Plus, war taints everyone. I wonder if guilt darkens the colour too?
Interesting idea, Btw ^^
The question is, how far will they want to go to prevrnt another DL to rise?
Anyways, Harrys Aura being blue-black doesn't sound so good. Not like I'm surprisd, mind you. Afer his life...
'Sides what does Kings expect? Red is probably the colour of some poor innocent wizard who never had to lose his innocence as young as Harry. Plus, war taints everyone. I wonder if guilt darkens the colour too?
Interesting idea, Btw ^^
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October 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
You know, if Harry was thinking...and listening...he would have said HELL no right off the bat. After all, he
did have a piece of horcrux inside him for years, that should have made him cautious...with yellow signs flashing.
did have a piece of horcrux inside him for years, that should have made him cautious...with yellow signs flashing.