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December 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I understand needing to look back to see where you left off in a story. I feel the same because I am reading more than one story at a time. When you factor in the time between updates which can get lengthy, I get confused sometimes over what the plot and character are like in a story. I hope Harry is going to man up and tell them off soon. After all he saved the world,
what difference does it make - light or dark? Anyone really knowing him knows he wouldn't hurt anyone except in defense. He's behaving like a dufuss, like he has no brain, doing and believing whatever they tell him.
what difference does it make - light or dark? Anyone really knowing him knows he wouldn't hurt anyone except in defense. He's behaving like a dufuss, like he has no brain, doing and believing whatever they tell him.
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November 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about #6..
Smart indeed. I love a Take Charge Harry who has his wits about him. :-)
I have to ask, is it sometimes hard keeping the individual characters separate..or are you
now used to writing them that it's easy?
Smart indeed. I love a Take Charge Harry who has his wits about him. :-)
I have to ask, is it sometimes hard keeping the individual characters separate..or are you
now used to writing them that it's easy?
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November 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about #5..
Despite what Kingsley says, how come he sounds like he doesn't want to help?
Despite what Kingsley says, how come he sounds like he doesn't want to help?
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November 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about #4...
That was a nice explanation you did on the difference of Light and Dark. If anything
Draco would be the one to make a good political figurehead, if they get this off the ground.
That was a nice explanation you did on the difference of Light and Dark. If anything
Draco would be the one to make a good political figurehead, if they get this off the ground.
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November 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Taint? Um.... no. More like the natural effect of having a hard life in the real world. Something tells me that they are mistaking 'hard life' for 'darkness' here. Remember: Aurors have cast the killing curse and other 'dark' curses, are they going to say that they are tainted and therefore do not deserve to live anymore?
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November 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Finally Harry is begining to think for himself instead of being told what he is and what he should do. Of course he still wants to run everything by Hermione & Ron like he is stupid and is just a figurehead...needs to be told what to do. Yea Draco!!
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November 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about #3...
1. And it was the same thing with Malfoy
1. And it was the same thing with Malfoy
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November 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Man sucks to be Harry, that man gets no rest whatsoever. You would think after all he has done that people would give him the benefit of the doubt. I do believe I am going to enjoy this latest work from you. I know I have said it before but I love the handle you got on the friendship between Hermione and harry in your stories, I mean I like Ron too but the scenes between those two are just so sweet most of the time since being a Muggleborn she can relate to Harry on a different level and you show the mutual platonic love and trust they share very well. Quite a bit of irony(or perhaps hypocrisy?) in how Malfoy and Pansy are talking about their rights getting taken away considering certain ideology's they used(?) to adhere to and how other peoples rights didn't matter much to them. Curious on how the meeting between them and Harry will go and whether they really have the stones to go forward with their blackmail. Granted that they are very desperate it is still a dick move lol. If you want to convince people that you're not bad.............things like blackmail are 'kind' of a step backwards.
-waits patiently for the next chapter-
-waits patiently for the next chapter-
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November 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Harry seems so unsure even lost in this story. Not crazy about this side of him. Hope Draco, Hermione, someone gives him a backbone soon. For heaven's sake he should know he is not like Voldemore or other dark wizards. He's not stupid just naive and probably worn out from all the war he had to go through. Everybody has some dark in them no matter how good they are.
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October 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start. Harry is so casual about how he reacts to the ministry's "requests" that are actually demands and so naive about how people can be influenced to react however they are led. He's already in trouble with how people including some who know him therefor should know better are looking at him. Hope Draco and Harry hook up quick and work together to "right the wrongs" of this crazy wizarding society...looks like they are jumping to conclusions again.