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December 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about #11...
I've come to the conclusion that I like 'Take Charge Harry', very good chapter, with
the right amount of intensity.
I've come to the conclusion that I like 'Take Charge Harry', very good chapter, with
the right amount of intensity.
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December 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Never though to read this , but I was wrong it's very interesting and again Potter in the middle of everything......he is either the one to save everyone or the one everyone blames for everything !!!!! Thanks !!
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December 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about #10...
1. Could you put a list of the colors in the first chapter & what they mean, if you don't mind.
2. Have you ever thought of doing a H/D story, with Neville costarring in an equal part of it? Where
he is represented as you do him here as a strong, confident individual, but it is made clear in the story
that there was a reason he was considered possibly a candidate for the 'Chosen One'. No one really focuses
on Neville anymore.
1. Could you put a list of the colors in the first chapter & what they mean, if you don't mind.
2. Have you ever thought of doing a H/D story, with Neville costarring in an equal part of it? Where
he is represented as you do him here as a strong, confident individual, but it is made clear in the story
that there was a reason he was considered possibly a candidate for the 'Chosen One'. No one really focuses
on Neville anymore.
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December 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I know I say it a lot but the Hermione and Harry scenes are perfect. Absolute trust and love. And I know I have a tendency to harp on about morality in my reviews but does Harry know that they will be getting assistance from Blaise's mother and if so does he know that she is a murderer? I mean if your trying to prove that dark wizard does not equal evil, isn't it a step backwards to work with someone who murders her husbands?
I like how easily all the characters flow here too. Hermione and Neville don't like Draco and have no reason to care what happens to him but are willing to put all that aside if Harry needs them. Will Narcissa be showing up eventually or is she still laying low and given the public's current views on Dark wizards how is someone like Lucius being treated in Azkaban? Like since tension is at an all time high are people taking the chance to deal out a little payback?
Assuming she has a roll in this fic, will Fleur be getting involved in any way? A lot of stories have Veela being very protective of there significant other and given that her husband has been locked away for no reason, is she going to start raising hell and joining Harry? And if so will she be having words with the Draco since he was the one who let fenrir into the school which resulted in Bill getting attacked.
It would be sweet if they could get Minerva to aid them. High profile light side resident bad ass witch. Also since this whole lightfinder business could eventually effect the students at her school she has more than enough reason to get involved. Pottermore and the new edition books revealed a lot of crap I didn't know about her life. Hell I didn't even know that she almost married a muggle or that she was apart of the Department of Magical law enforcement at one time.
Sucks to be Kingsley I suppose. Heavy is the head that wears the crown.
-waits patiently for the next chapter-
I like how easily all the characters flow here too. Hermione and Neville don't like Draco and have no reason to care what happens to him but are willing to put all that aside if Harry needs them. Will Narcissa be showing up eventually or is she still laying low and given the public's current views on Dark wizards how is someone like Lucius being treated in Azkaban? Like since tension is at an all time high are people taking the chance to deal out a little payback?
Assuming she has a roll in this fic, will Fleur be getting involved in any way? A lot of stories have Veela being very protective of there significant other and given that her husband has been locked away for no reason, is she going to start raising hell and joining Harry? And if so will she be having words with the Draco since he was the one who let fenrir into the school which resulted in Bill getting attacked.
It would be sweet if they could get Minerva to aid them. High profile light side resident bad ass witch. Also since this whole lightfinder business could eventually effect the students at her school she has more than enough reason to get involved. Pottermore and the new edition books revealed a lot of crap I didn't know about her life. Hell I didn't even know that she almost married a muggle or that she was apart of the Department of Magical law enforcement at one time.
Sucks to be Kingsley I suppose. Heavy is the head that wears the crown.
-waits patiently for the next chapter-
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December 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Just came across this recently and am happy to say that it is all confirmed canon and just felt like sharing:
http://littlebastardreviews.tumblr.com/post/103497157292/facts-from-the-2014-uk-editions-of-harry-potter
http://littlebastardreviews.tumblr.com/post/103497157292/facts-from-the-2014-uk-editions-of-harry-potter
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December 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Before I begin and would like to say thank you for responding to my prompt and I am stoked that your cool with writing it.
Glad to see Hermione getting involved and now that individuals in the Ministry have gone and actually imprisoned someone I am all for some juicy rebellion. I am also curious how Hermione would show up in the lightfinder? Nice too see that her and Malfoy can put there enmity aside for the time being for a higher cause. Will be interesting too se how well she works with the Slytherins given there history and whether she can be in the same room as pansy.
Does Kingsley fully support all of this? I mean Aurthur Weasley is a dear friend and fellow order member so wouldn't he be able to pull some strings and get bill moved to at least some better location? Speaking of which are the rest of the Weasely clan going to raise some hell over this or are they being monitored too closely to act? I take it Harry is being selective on who he brings into the fold and won't be reforming the old 'Dumbledores Army" or the Order of the Phoenix since they would not be okay with working with a known death eater and Slytherins in general?
About the whole 'facing Voldemort alone deal". THAT was Harry's choice, yes he was the only one who could kill the guy but outside of Dumbledore and Snape NONE of the other adults or students knew the bleaker points of the prophecy and any one or all of them would have stood by Harry if they knew the truth. He figured out what he would have too do and in the book at least made the effort to not tell anyone on what he was going to do. All he did was tell Neville to take care of the snake. He made the conscious effort to ensure that it would be just him and tom.
Glad too see someone at least acknowledge Neville as a war hero and horucrux-snake killing bad ass.
I like this line:
Draco held his gaze, and nodded. "And I'll apologize for that to him. Not to you."
Draco is a 'bit' of an ass most of the time but he will own up to that old mistake he made, but ONLY to the man who was hurt from it and no one else. If anything it makes me respect him a little more.
Glad to see Hermione getting involved and now that individuals in the Ministry have gone and actually imprisoned someone I am all for some juicy rebellion. I am also curious how Hermione would show up in the lightfinder? Nice too see that her and Malfoy can put there enmity aside for the time being for a higher cause. Will be interesting too se how well she works with the Slytherins given there history and whether she can be in the same room as pansy.
Does Kingsley fully support all of this? I mean Aurthur Weasley is a dear friend and fellow order member so wouldn't he be able to pull some strings and get bill moved to at least some better location? Speaking of which are the rest of the Weasely clan going to raise some hell over this or are they being monitored too closely to act? I take it Harry is being selective on who he brings into the fold and won't be reforming the old 'Dumbledores Army" or the Order of the Phoenix since they would not be okay with working with a known death eater and Slytherins in general?
About the whole 'facing Voldemort alone deal". THAT was Harry's choice, yes he was the only one who could kill the guy but outside of Dumbledore and Snape NONE of the other adults or students knew the bleaker points of the prophecy and any one or all of them would have stood by Harry if they knew the truth. He figured out what he would have too do and in the book at least made the effort to not tell anyone on what he was going to do. All he did was tell Neville to take care of the snake. He made the conscious effort to ensure that it would be just him and tom.
Glad too see someone at least acknowledge Neville as a war hero and horucrux-snake killing bad ass.
I like this line:
Draco held his gaze, and nodded. "And I'll apologize for that to him. Not to you."
Draco is a 'bit' of an ass most of the time but he will own up to that old mistake he made, but ONLY to the man who was hurt from it and no one else. If anything it makes me respect him a little more.
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December 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about#8...
PLEASE tell me you're going to put that ward spell in action, it would be a
crime not to. :-)
PLEASE tell me you're going to put that ward spell in action, it would be a
crime not to. :-)
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December 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about #7..
Splinter always seemed like he wanted things for his own personal gains, when he was
first introduced, now he has an underlying motive. He 'smells' fishy. Personally I find
the Lightfinder very flawed...and tainted.
2. Aster sounds like he can be very valuable as an ally AND sneaky to boot! :-)
Splinter always seemed like he wanted things for his own personal gains, when he was
first introduced, now he has an underlying motive. He 'smells' fishy. Personally I find
the Lightfinder very flawed...and tainted.
2. Aster sounds like he can be very valuable as an ally AND sneaky to boot! :-)
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December 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
A very good chapter to the story. So Draco has now found a very old person who perhaps knows the source of the "Lightfinder".... I am betting that the "Lightfinder" does not find light, it finds the will to rise up against oppressors and someone in the ministry is trying to turn the magical world into their obedient little sheep.
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December 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
ahhh... good good good... Harry and Draco will need all the help they can get and it will be fun watching them get back at the ministry. Nice to see Harry isn't as gullible as he was.