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for The Dove; Distressed

by lexiatel

schedule April 8, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Is ... is that the end? I'm not unhappy that they ended up together, I just felt it was a little anti-climatic. If it's not the end, then ignore me (: I would love a little more insight as to why he treats her the way he does, then claims to love her? Fair enough, he's damaged etc, but he's flat out threatened to kill her. That's what I struggle accepting, even of someone demented but in love. Please update if it's not the end! I'm loving this thoroughly underrated story! And nice! You used a variation of the lust spell in His Relinquishment - loved it! AKxx
person De Noir fan
schedule February 26, 2016 at 12:00 AM
This didn't get abandoned did it? I thoroughly enjoyed this fic and its predecessor!! On to read yet another of your lovely fics :)
person De Noir fan
schedule February 26, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to encourage you. As someone who is in the middle of my first fanfic (on ff.net), I know how discouraging it can be to have a lack of feedback via reviews, views, & ratings. I try to remind myself when I am feeling like I have no audience that I started for myself. Writing to please myself and not others. And I also know just how awesome of a boost it is when I get that lovely positive review from someone too! I love your stories. "His Relinquishment" being my favorite. I admire the risks you take and continue to write what you want even if I might offend someone. I say Bravo!
schedule April 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
extremly good is there a sequel to this
person Krystaal
schedule January 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I read every one of your stories. I have to say that there are only two authors that I make sure to read every one of their stories and like I said, you are one of the two. You are also my first review. I saw that you added the 5 chapters and mentioned that no one seemed interested. I can tell you that I wait impatiently for your updates. I really hope that you decide to continue as I would be devastated if I didn't get to see what happens next. Please keep going with this story. It is amazing and so are you!
person Celticdewin
schedule January 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I read most of this story and the one before it in one night. I think it is interesting and would like to see more.
person Pandapaw
schedule October 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I positively loved this and so can not wait for the next chapter! Both stories are very very good. Please continue to write these delicious stories! :-)