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Wow! Just one chapter and i'm already hooked! Can't wait for the next chapter! Alas, I don't have time to be a beta right now (I would have liked to, but I've got an already strangled schedule), but I wanted to signal a little mistake in the last part of the first letter, it's clear conscience, not conscious (http://www.vocabulary.com/articles/chooseyourwords/conscious-conscience/) ^^'
It's wery well written so far :)

Cool first chapter :) sounds like a good story so far and im looking forward to reading more :)

really nice start !!!! looking forward for more !!!!!!

Looks like a good one! How can a story get removed unless it goes beyond its code like "M" or "K" or whatever? I'm putting my faith in you to finish the story. Nothing worse than being left hanging and wondering by an unfinished story.

I's a nice beginning, and I must say that if that was un-beta-ed, it was great. I look forward to seeing more. It seems that new stories are much less frequent than they used to be. Thanks for writing!

it's an interesting start and I look forward to see where you take this.