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by valkyrie136

person magi
schedule October 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Yes! New chapter!
But too short though.
More please!
person Ariel
schedule October 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Update!
person Ari
schedule October 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
That was amazing! I absolutely loved it.
person Nana
schedule October 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Brutal chapter...it shows how his mind is slowly coming to realize she won't love him. It's like setting the stage for his mental breakdown or the real start of his obsession.
person lexiatel
schedule October 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Liking it so far. Malfoy is such a toad :P
person lilythg
schedule October 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This looks good. Is there a chance she'll get pregnant?
person A_Diva
schedule October 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
You like making Hermione pathetic. I'm not sure why. Draco seems more stable in this story.Gross, but stable.

Bliase is not tan because of Mediterranean ancestry. There was no reason to even point that out...
person A_Diva
schedule October 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Draco needs to realize he's obsessed with Hermione. This behavior is very unhealthy.
Hermione and Ron are killing me oddly with their sugary sweet love. Sheesh.
person magi
schedule October 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! New Chapter!

That just have to be really embarrassing for Hermione to be caught like that. Malfoy's jealousy is showing and I like it.
What will he do as a retaliation though?
I'm sure Hermione will suffer.

This line though...
"And she didn
person A_Diva
schedule October 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I was wondering when Ron and Draco would get in to it. I do like a jealous Draco.

I seriously can't buy Hermione and sneaking into the nurse's office to have sex. I know you like Draco, but Hermione doesn't have to find be dumbed down to make him look good.