rate_review Reviews

Well, if you want a sad ending, have Ron die and Draco continue to live as him. If you want a twisted ending, you could have Hermione remember her attacks, but Ron is the one she see's hurting her. Draco, in his true form, pretends to be the one to save her because he's given Ron a potion that makes him do bad things. That's the story you could have told. Ron could have been the one to hurt Hermione so that Draco could swoop in and pick up the pieces, although it was Draco who caused Ron to hurt her. Ron dies and no one realizes the truth. I think that could be the plot of a different tale.

hmm...I'm not sure what you'll do with this one. I think you've written yourself into a corner. Maybe Hermione remembers what happened. She leaves Harry a note and runs up to the astronomy tower to clear her head. Draco, after having let the deatheaters into the castle and killing Dumbledore, finds her up there and plans to take her away with him. Draco is being his nasty self and boasting of killing Ron or some such evil deed. Maybe he talks about how good the sex was, idk. Hermione grows upset as the images of her rape invade her mind. Sad at the loss of Ron and her virtue to Draco, she throws herself off the astronomy tower.

No one wins. Draco doesn't get the girl and Hermione dies. However, I do like the idea of her haunting him. The bastard. OR in your dark style, Draco finds away to bring her soul back, so she's attached to him forever. He is obsessed with her. I say go with no one winning. A year later, Draco lying on the ground dying as the war rages on around him. He see's Hermione's spirit staring down sadly at him. He vision blurs as he grow week. He whispers her name like a prayer, struggling to hold onto life. Ron's spirit walks up behind her, takes her hand, and pulls her up into the light. Draco's world fades to black and he dies with no one to mourn him.



Anyhow, that's all I have. It's all over the place, but in my defense it's late her. Good Luck.

Thanks for updating hope you stop banging your head again the wall and looking forward to finding out what happened between hg going from the library to potions.

I've been waiting for this update!
And two at once is pretty awesome!

Now,can you strap your muse in a chair so it'll never leave?
Haha, just keep going, much of your readers are just excited to read a piece from you.

Fabulous, dark story! Draco's obsession with Hermione is depraved yet a guilty pleasure to read about. You write wickedly good sex scenes.

I am a new reader and an avid Dramione shipper,
though this is a change from what I usually read
which are, light and fluffy ff's I gave it a shot and I like
it. You have got to continue.

P.s.
What happened to the real Ron when Draco was polyjuicing
himself as Ron?

I hear your outcry for reviews. Have thus one. I love this story. I like my Draco like I like my coffee, black, and with a grimace since I don't really drink coffee. Please keep writing. I hope for a ending with justice for our dark little rapist. May I beg for longer chapters?

More please!

More...! :) I love this story, hehe! I love the "Good Day" haha :)

Oh no...is that Malfoy or Blaise on the juice?

The power of poly juice