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by valkyrie136

person ilariasantaniello
schedule November 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
ciao ho letto sia questa dramione che l'altra, quella in cui draco era un veela e wow io ADORO la dramione!!! Mi piace un draco oscuro, forte consapevole di s
person lexiatel
schedule November 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
WOW... that's pretty awesome :)

And that Lucius was able to tell...

So I wonder if Hermione will be able to eventually.
person ShaniLash
schedule November 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I get the very strong feeling that Lucius knows about Draco from the way he kept looking at him.
person magi
schedule November 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
You are very naughty to keep us hanging like that.
Geeze!!
I like it that you have finally made Draco voice out his feels!
Albeit in a crazy, obsessive and destructive way.
And poor Ron!
person A_Diva
schedule November 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love! Ha! Draco doesn't know the meaning of the word. He's obsessed with her.

Thank you for the compliment. I'm glad you liked my ideas. I've written a few fics but not on this site.
person sherlocked17
schedule November 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Well chapter 17 was puzzling You should elaborate on that one.
person Guest
schedule November 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I've never reviewed a story bf although I have enjoyed reading HP FFiction, but I've made an exception for this story. I was originally hooked by reading the first 11 chaps of the last post. It was superb. Great writing and Great story, very intriguing. I was beside myself to realize that you had picked it up again. Just wanted to let you know that I will continue to be a faithful reader of yours for as long as you continue to write.
person lexiatel
schedule November 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is great! It would be awesome if she finally found out she had been fucking Draco, and he actually made her wet for him :P
person m
schedule November 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I didn't know you were struggling, you can't tell that from the way your writing this story. I honestly don't know what to say here. But this is amazing story and I do hope you find a way to finish this. remember not all story end with happily ever after. keep up the good job!
person Shane
schedule November 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really like how this is progressing as for ideas I was assuming you were somehow going to make hermoine end up liking draconian in a weird convoluted way...I can dream right. Or even if draco somehow roped her into a relationship by threatening Rons life I dunno was never really creative in ideas