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for A Brother to Basilisks

by Lomonaaeren

person Anonymous
schedule July 25, 2016 at 12:00 AM

SP777

about #85...

Of all the things that happened in this chapter, the on edge conversation between Harry & Dash was a glimpse of what I've been wanting to see for a long time. Because of the fact Dash is growing fast and wants to do what comes naturally to him, while Harry is still a kid and has to deal with that fact. Harry is somehow going to need to be firm ...and understanding that his basilisk is not a tame animal he IS and can be dangerous.

Plus Harry has to find a balance that Dash can live with in order to peacefully continue living in society or there will be some headaches in the future. Btw, get my email?

person Anonymous
schedule July 10, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Whoa!

person Anonymous
schedule July 10, 2016 at 12:00 AM

SP777

about #84...

Oh look, they left it right there just when it was getting good. *looks at the author*

person Anonymous
schedule July 9, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Yes, let this be the moment that Dumblef*ck dies! Please! He cannot be redemmed. The very idea that he is trying to rebuild Harry into someone he can turn into a good little brainless soilder needs to DIE!

person Anonymous
schedule July 9, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Finally! I got to read the chapters! Yay! And they where where amazing. 

I loved the part with "Even more important than embarrassing Harry and making him blush was being right." That was so sweet. I loved that part with Draco.

and when Harry took the cup, I really was not prepared that dumbledore would be there. Actually the way you write him makes me shudder. I am glad Dash is there now.

Again thanks for writing!

person Anonymous
schedule July 3, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I just found your story, and have been powering through it these last few days. Fantastic! Though the cliff hanger is killing me. One question though, you haven't done anything yet with the box that Lucius bought from Borgin & Burks to somehow get rid of the dark mark on his arm. And I was wondering if he's going to share the removal method with Snape? -Alto
person Anonymous
schedule June 26, 2016 at 12:00 AM
whattttt. unexpected! can't wait for the next chapter and see when Dash finally catches up to Dumbledore
person Anonymous
schedule June 26, 2016 at 12:00 AM

SP777

about #83...

I was wondering how long it would be before Dash got to use 'the eyes'...and don't tell me Dumbledore has gone batty. Also I see they changed the damn format on the site again.

person SP777
schedule June 19, 2016 at 12:00 AM
about #82... Now that is very embarrassing two young wizards beaten by a snake of all things. *tsk* But that's a good revelation you did about Dash, but who says Harry couldn't live another decade or two? What's the point of magic if you can't stretch boundaries that has nothing to do with murder. I'm all for life extension. Btw, I think you & I saw the same show about the snake & the gazelle, very creepy to watch.
person SP777
schedule June 7, 2016 at 12:00 AM
about #81... Not much to say here, but I was wondering how old would Dash be now?