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for A Brother to Basilisks

by Lomonaaeren

person staar
schedule February 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
so Snape has found out that Dubbles does not protect the kids at all...and that Harry is one of them...why in hell is he writing to Lucius !!!!!!!!! and Hermione is she spying already on Harry behind his back !!!!!!!! Thanks good one !!!!
person moodysavage
schedule February 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I really like how even though this is a Harry Draco story you still have Snape as a likable major character. One because I love him so and two because I like his Slytherin plans lol. Whiny Draco was also cute when he found out Harry had an invisibility cloak.
person ChaosLady
schedule February 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Severus is definitely playing a deep game now. With a lot to lose in the bargain. He might as well be juggling with Nitro glycerin. Well written.
person SP777
schedule February 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
about #17...

1. Okay, so all the time Harry was talking to Dash it WAS the mental bond and not by Parseltongue, now see that
was confusing to me all this time, because I had the impression he was always talking snake language.

2. Why do I get the feeling Dash has a darker side?

3. You know I always wished for a Snape as Mentor story, have you done those? Have you thought about doing another
Severitus story?
person staar
schedule February 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
that was nice of Snape and what is he up to now !!!!!!! Thanks for the update !
person Meechypoo
schedule January 31, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Poor Harry. He always feels so confused when most of the adults talk to him. He thinks it's because he's dumb or young to understand Tem, but more often than not its because the adults have ulterior motives or aren't telling him them whole truth. Harry's going to be very upset when he finds out Sirius is not telling him everything as well.

~~ Meechy
person ChaosLady
schedule January 31, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Great update!
person SP777
schedule January 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
about # 16...

I really liked this one. Do I have to explain why? I just did...
person delia cerrano
schedule January 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Always like reading this story updates. Though I would like to smack Harry for not realizing that Dumbledore is not his best friend!! Also for giving Sirius all credit when it is still James he loves & would probably be angry and start ignoring or worse if he doewsn't act just like James or hate the ones James did. More Draco getting involved please.
person ChaosLady
schedule January 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
It's sweet that Sirius decorated Harry's room the way Harry wanted but it's sad that Harry never had that before. Bittersweet.Excellent update!