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for A Brother to Basilisks

by Lomonaaeren

person SP777
schedule May 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
about #31....

Daaaang! Talk about complications. :-/
If this is about the rest of the prophesy, well I can see why Sirius is hesitant.
person moon
schedule May 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Enjoying it :) I really love Snape as a character. I also like how you are portraying young Harry.
person starr
schedule May 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I love that Harry said yes to Draco's promise to practice on his powers !!!! what is Black lying about now !!!!!! Thanks for the update !!!
person ChaosLady
schedule May 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I know what Sirius was lying about! He was lying about not knowing how to teach Harry to defend himself. In fact, it sounds like Sirius was laying the groundwork for Harry talking to Dumbledore again. Great update!
person SP777
schedule May 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
about #30...

A swift in the pants would have sufficed but it'll do.
Dash should be too large at this point to be carried.

...and that would have been the perfect time for Severus to say
that he didn't like the name, course Harry & Dash would have been
insulted. :-)
person SP777
schedule May 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
..a swift kick in the pants...
person ChaosLady
schedule May 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Eventful. Well written.
person starr
schedule May 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I feel for Snape , trying to do the write thing but with everyone against him it's hard...and Harry in the middle of all of it...Black is a child in this one so annoying Thanks for the update !!
person SP777
schedule May 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
about #29..

You know it WOULD be nice if Severus puts Sirius in his place, but the poetic justice of
Harry doing it would be sweeter.
person Anon
schedule May 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Severus1snape here.
this is the first timw I don't like sirius or dumbledore... sighs but loooove snape