about 118...
Boy those cliffhangers are something else! :-)
about #117...
Well I enjoyed this..it felt like I was looking at other people's POV for a change and not necessarily Harry & Dash's POV all the time. Not a bad thing, but a good change up. Also it's good to see other non-humans who are not just werewolves & centaurs.
Ch116 - Oh, I felt for Draco in this chapter. That feeling of want and pain when he looks at Harry was too similar to my own feelings (back when I allowed myself to have them). So glad that Harry is willing to love Draco. And, nice to see the plotting continue with Theo falling into line too, now. SP.
Ch115 - Dash might get to eat Umbridge? Oh, how happy that makes me! So much political stuff this chapter, and Draco getting closer to Harry. Lovely. SP
CH113 - Why oh why didn't Harry let Dash eat Umbridge?! *cries* Glad to see Lucius is using his smarts and gathering support. SP
Ch113: Loving sneaky Narcissa. And I like that your Harry is less of a hormone/anger ridden idiot than the canon Harry in OotP - his duel with the Pink Bitch was great. SP
about #112...
good chapter...nothing much happening here tho'
Ch112 - I've just sat and devoured this whole story in two sittings. It is brilliant! I love the slowly building love between Harry and Draco, how awesome Severus is, Dash, all the political games, and the way you are altering the canon to fit the new reality of what Harry is.
I really REALLY hope Dash gets to eat Umbridge, rather than letting her get handed over to the centaurs. Also, I was wondering how/if you were going to handle the Deathly Hallows. Dash killed Dumbledore, and unless I missed something, no one had disarmed Albus before that point, so would Harry be the master of the Elder Wand? And, given he and Voldie share souls, would that mean Voldie would also be able to be its master?
Anyway, this is superb! SP
about #109..
1. Severus...Father Hen: live and in full effect!
2. Come now, you gotta give Dash his mini pool....he'd love it. :-)
3. Will Severus ever be called dad by Harry in the future OR be introduced to the muggle tradition that is called Father's Day....as appreciation of course.
about #108...
1. Still love the Severus & Harry moments
2. Any oppurtunity you can give Severus to humiliate Sirius..will be most welcome.