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Okay I had to go back and reread the last few chapters as I didn't quite follow the story line, the hazards of 8 yr old boys you know lol. Dash and Harry's bond seems to be threatened from both Moody and Dumbledore. Wonder if Dumbledore is going to lose his shit when Nagini appears with Voldemort? He already thinks Harry is going dark, that would really confirm it wouldn't it? Looking forward to seeing if Draco is right about his father. Thanks for a new chapter :D

I'm so happy to read that Harry's on the right path again and mending his bonds not only with Dash, but Draco and Snape as well. I had a feeling Dumblefuck put that spell on Harry or that he and Moody cast the spell together in order to both influence Harry to their way of thinking. And something else I've noticed, not just in your stories, but others I've enjoyed reading, that out of Harry's two best friends, Hermione is usually written to be more supportive of Harry's actions when he starts to grow from the 11 year old she first meets. Ron, not so much. Because I've seen this theme before, I think it says something about how people view his character. But I hope that because Ron's been supportive of Harry in your story before, the jealous little brat gets his head out of his ass for his friends' sake.

about #47...

Well, at least, they were able to finally talk about the problem of what might have
happened between Harry & Dash. Personally I'm all for Lucius getting involved, if
anyone can get to the bottom of 'under-handed' dealings, it's him.

Soo, when does the Tournament start?

It's very good. I caught up and is coming along so nicely. Good work!

I like poor awkward Harry... thrown by a hug :)

I'm glad Draco and Harry made up. And Harry came to his senses. Wonderful chapter!

I...love...this story! I'm so captivated! I think I would've just kept reading but I had to make this comment; Dash sounds so much like Draco! Lol that's all I kept thinking every time I read his lines....it all just reminded me of Draco....of course that could've been because I'm a huge Drarry fan and was seeing through my Drarry glasses lol...well, back to reading

Hmm wonder what Draco felt :D eeee


~Eros

about #46...

You know, I have to say...it's about TIME you let Dash ''loose''. I knew there was more
to the snake than what I was reading. Can't be a basilisk and not bring some type of fear in
the mix. I was actually rooting for the snake, but wouldn't have wanted him to get himself...or Harry..
in trouble.

Hopefully the both of them get to have that much needed talk.

I think McGonagall is now fully on Harry's side and may even be convinced to work in collusion with Snape against Dumbledore. Excellent update!