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November 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Out of all the stories I've read that you've written - and I've been reading a lot of them, starting from your earliest because I just love your writing so much - this one has resonated with me the most. I love the character interactions, and the depth of those characters, the stories behind them, the conflicts, the resolutions, the growth, the pace of the development, that you're not hurrying through it. I just can't tell you how much I am enjoying this story. It's just caught me so deeply and tugs at every emotion I have - sad, happy, protective, devastated, ecstatic, frustrated, angry, etc. The whole array. Thank you for writing this. I think it will be a favorite of mine for a very long time.
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November 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Gorgeous chapter, loved how Snape was not prepared to wait for something tragic to happen to Harry for him to rescue him but proactively got him away from the bad influence that is Sirius in an adult and mature way. He knew Harry's needs more than Harry did which shows just how much he cares for him. I love the growing relationship between Harry and Snape which is a relationship I don't think you've explored in any of your other stories. So gorgeous, eagerly anticipating the next part!
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November 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I feel so bad for Harry. Sirius has an image of Harry in his mind and just doesn't really see Harry as who he is... that dialogue went perfectly showing how everyone was thinking and reacting. I'm glad Severus was there to comfort Harry because it's really hard to give up on something you wanted to believe so badly but realize that it was never what you thought it was and will never be what you hoped.
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November 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
about 57....
That was an unusual conversation, almost felt like he was under a spotlight.
...and what did Harry mean ''Sirius told him about the prophecy'', when did that
happen???
That was an unusual conversation, almost felt like he was under a spotlight.
...and what did Harry mean ''Sirius told him about the prophecy'', when did that
happen???
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November 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow. There are some interesting points in this conversation. Harry's building trust in Severus and the Malfoys and his waning (at best) trust n Sirius and dumbledore. Can't wait to see the 'more' with Draco and I can't wait to watch Severus make his move. The undermining of dumbledore with the potion thing is brilliant. Update soon. Kudos.
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November 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Go Narcissa! How very Slytherin of her. Excellent update!
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November 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful to see the story updated again. Two chapters! *fangirl squeal* I can't wait to read all of Black's lies and betrayal tossed in his face and for Harry to turn his back on him because of it. Too bad he's more of Dumblef*cks' boy and less of the guardian Harry needs him to be. All the better for when Snape fills in for the fatherly figure Harry needs. Or that's what I dream about having read your other story where Snape is Harry's father. But it does make me wonder about something. Say James and Lily survived, would they be in Dumbledorks' back pocket or would they support their son 100%? I have less faith in James and more in Lily with that train of thought.
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November 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
about #56..
This was a nice chapter, felt relaxed believe or not. :-)
I almost expected Harry to put the ring on Draco's hand himself, that
would have been sweet! Course Harry is clueless at this point...
Hey, by any chance thinking of a S/H/D story soon?
This was a nice chapter, felt relaxed believe or not. :-)
I almost expected Harry to put the ring on Draco's hand himself, that
would have been sweet! Course Harry is clueless at this point...
Hey, by any chance thinking of a S/H/D story soon?
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November 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Finally!!! Now I'm giddy with excitement. Draco and Harry are so cute. Keep the chapters coming. Kudos.
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November 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Do you always have to leave it on a cliffhanger? Harry and Draco were so cute in this chapter. I know what secret Sirius is keeping, and yeah, it would eat him up inside to keep it from Harry- especially WHY he had to keep it from Harry. I have no clue what Narcissa is about to tell Harry, though. Excellent update!